can't wait for the next chapter in this story

Please update your story soon!

Wonderful! ;)
Update immediately, please!

I was starting to feel a little sorry for Jack and Maddie. key word: was. why the hell would they be so angry about them marrying a ghost when they are half ghosts themselves?!

Pls come back or at least tell us if theres a sequel Xc

Please update

Love this story hope you can continue it

Good story!

I love all your fanfics but this one is my favorite. Please update as soon as possible. :)

Welcome back it been too long since u last update the story omg cannot u finally continue I was worry that the story just dead there I glad that u still continues it

I feeling that Danny maybe go to the dark side or anti hero as he say he willing to kill anyone who try to hurt jazz or dani. I really like to know who is Danny going to meet and hopefully Danny will join the same paths as Jazz of been a hero overall I love this story! I'm addicted! Great job! Keep up the great work! :) update soon

It's funny but true here. Most of this conflict comes down to parents and children having conflicting views of what's right.

Pandora is so much on up and protecting her offspring and avoiding which uses the pitfalls of certain jobs. But she's being unclear why she feels that way I get the feeling that she's speaking from her own experience when he says being a hero is a trap

But on the other hand, jazz is feeling ignored because her feelings and why she feels that way are being blatantly ignored

They both need a lesson, the other's feeling and lay their cards on the table

As for Danny. He's conflicted actions to protect others also evil by narrow definition. He's using

He is making a valuable point on when to use and how to use force
the fact he still questions that shows he's already has restraint

True people of conscience will not sleep well every battle haunted by the decisions and second-guessing them

True villains or social paths will sleep well they don't care because their actions don't bother them at all

We shall see

Cool job here, and it seems Danny is gonna meet a very cool historic hero.

Keep the good writing.

cool very nice

Wonder who the hero will be?

Glad to see this updated. It seems like the GIW have something nefarious planned with their stealing of the AI. I wonder who Danny will be seeing? Keep up the good work!