Good story! Women are beautiful if they are happy - they just have to learn to believe that. (Although I know that I could use to lose some weight. But that's okay - I am old, not young like Bella.)
Thanx for sharing!
(BTW - I LOVE your Tinman stories on another page!)

Man this made me tear up a bit. I loved it.

Cute story. Edward was sweet. Thanks for sharing it.

Great oneshot. Edward was awesome in showing Bella she should be happy with herself and not change for anyone but herself if she wants too.

Sweet story

Love, love, love! Again!

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So sad that she went through that for James. Unfortunately she had to see James with another. One should only ever change if they want to for their own self. Never for another person. It was very good that Edward saw what was happening and finally called her out for it When they got home that night. Since James was cheating on her, I hope she always had him wearing condoms or, she just exposed Edward to all of the women James had been with during his time with Bella. I am very glad that they got together. That they seem like they may last forever.

I really, really enjoyed reading this.

:)

I really enjoyed this. Nice, short and makes you feel good :)

Tee hee. Happy is the most important thing for sure. If you are happy with yourself then don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Thanks for sharing. :)

Now I'm sad. Because no guy ever looks at me in that way because I'm fat. But it was a great story. I guess I'll just have to hope for that with someone someday. Or get skinny. I don't know

Being a larger size woman myself, I identified with this story, and loved it! Thank you for writing that women (and men) should love themselves for who they are, and find someone who loved them unconditionally!

Great job!
xoSus

That was beautifully written and with such emotion! You definitely got your point across!
I really enjoyed this!
xoxoxo