I didnt finish my last review... is there a sequel or something because it was left with so many holes that are never explained

That was the end? What the actual fuk?

FUCK YOU! FUVK U U WORTHLESS PITIFUL BITCH! I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH! U RUINED IT ALL!

This story feels very incomplete... This felt like more of a beginning arc, an incomplete one as well, that would have spawned a great tale of redemption. It's a shame that you never came back to continue. I also have to mention that the timeline of the whole tournament felt very odd. Sometimes it felt like the battles took place day after day, but it would turn out that there were gaps in between in which ash would do other things. And I also got to say that the inclusion of the Lati's felt unnecessary and kind of forced. Perhaps there were plans for them to be used against team rocket or something, but their inclusion could have easily been place after the tournament as some sort of mini arc.

TLDR: All in all, the story has failed to give that sense of closure and ends with a longing to know what's next. In all honesty, I don't recommend you to read it if you're the type of reader that enjoys a story with good closure and fluid storytelling. But other than that, go on ahead and read it if you don't really give a shit about that kind of storytelling. Oh, and if you came here for lemons, there ain't none of that either.

my only problem so far is the fake name
Red Satoshi do you know how overrated and cliché it is

weird... ash didnt get his memory back?

brilliant!~~~~~~

Shitty ending if I wanted to see an anime ending I could just watch the anime. You know the one where ash never wins because reasons.

At times like this I wish there was a black list feature where I could have it where stories written by certain authors would not show up. Because I would blacklist all stories written by you in the future for wasting my time. So congrats on that I guess I will just have to settle with writing your username on a spreadsheet for now.

Woah

fucking cried my eyes out at the Sapphire scene... beautiful.

Nice job on this story!

that was the most bullshit ending to a half ass story. fuck this shit

Awesome I hope for more awesomeness from you in the future

WHY DID HE LOSE!, WHY COULDN'T YOU LET HIM WIN, (I don't think I can forgive you for this)

I am disappointed with how the story has ended . Ash should have won . There should be more stuff in relationship between Ash and Cynthia . The story ended , felt like it was forceful. Not looked like it ended genuinely