Perfect!

So cute! I loved the bow and arrow game!

I'm out of words :D It's beautiful :DD

Oh the sweet fluffiness of this story! I love it

This story was just so adorable w! loved it!

awww soo sweet!

cute ! i would love to read another chapter !

Very nice! I think is is so amazing fly sweet and I love it!

AWW SO MANY FEELINGS

Ah the fluff! I don't have words for how cute this was. xD I loved it! It's going right to my favorites list.

this is really cute

Awwwww:) This was sososossosososossosososososo sosososososososo good:) MALEC:)

AHH THE FLUFF! This was totally beyond cute! I love how Magnus got sick from the roller coaster, you'd think he'd be someone that would love them, but it was a good idea! And then Alec gets all serious and possessive "My Magnus" Mmmm ;)
Oh and Alec hitting the target without looking, instead staring at Magnus. GAH! That's just incredibly sexy.
You really incorporated the awkward in well with the kiss, making it seem more real for their second date. And your description of everything (especially the kiss - how it wasn't something Magnus was used to) the particular way you use words makes it all the more intriguing. Loved it! :)

its adorable ¡

HAPPY WHALE NOISES!