Please update!

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It's so amazing! I don't understand why would you need a beta reader though As far as I'm concerned, your English is pretty much flawless. I really enjoy the plot. I'm also thankful for the effort you put into her torture sessions. I'm really happy to see Sakura standing strong even in those kind of situations. And god her sass! I must admit I have laughed most of the time. Furthermore I would like to thank for the fact that you aren't rushing things with Sakura's relationship and blindness. Though the little faith her Konoha friends have for her saddens (oh god did I write that right?) me, poor her. I'm looking forward into seeing her growth in strength. I hope she'll find a good use in her blindness. I'm excited to see the next chapter. Konoha should be ready to regret! Continue the amazing work! _

I like it!

Never thought I would want to punch naruto and everyone else so much.. you go sakura! Oh please update soon

your English skills are just fine...so please continue this. This is a really inspiring story

this story is amazing cant wait till oou get that beta reader. please keep writing it xxx

The story is good but it really doesn't seem like an akatsuki/sakura pairing...

hello, I like! the next chapter I will wait impatiently, please upload it as fast as possible, I love this story, I was surprised and delighted, greetings and farewell.

ps: is my favorite story, sorry if I write wrong, since no English.

goodbye.

wow that was awsome ... please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

It's different. I can't wait for the next update.

...Please issue a rewrite and replace this chapter. The summary drew me in, but I couldn't even make it to your first page break. Basic grammar skills need A LOT of work. Some sentences are too long and confusing - I tried saying them aloud to help make sense of them but it got to be too much of a hassle. Punctuation, capital letters, and for goodness sake if your story is rated 'M' I think you're in the clear to properly curse. Among other things the asterisks are distracting. I really do like this story idea, but poor writing will keep me and many others from reading. I almost didn't leave a review. Please do not fall down the hole that so many fan fiction writers do. Take pride in your work.