Poor Tooth watching him die from both his viewpoint and his sisters.

ooooooh... plz continue! I feel some suspense at the end

THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL I DID CRY I KID YOU NOT
Serious! Beautifully written story here (': Thank you for sharing your work

hi this actually made me cry thanks its really good

lol wut happened to you tooth?

Rosie's part got me crying.

Great short

It's really nice how you gave some light to his sister and parents. Love it

tooth's thought processes leading up to it felt natural and not forced at all. I absolutely love the ending

Jakie Chan! God . Tooth just had to go say tgat.

Aaaannnd... She blew it. *Reaching through dimensions* HEY TOOTH! YA BLEW IT! Anyway, AMAZING story. I'm looking for moar. If you don't have more make more.

That was really cute. I loved the bit from rose's perspective

I loved this fic. It was so moving and the characterization was great. The end part where she calls him Jackie was hilarious. The only thing I'm wondering now is if he realizes she's seen his memories or not.

love it!

Nice

Aw, that was a nice story. It's good someone else knows who he was...great last line too lol