| Reviews for Fall and Fail |
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BatWingteenavenger chapter 15 . 5/4/2019 OH COME ON! Don't end it there! Must have more! |
Guest chapter 15 . 2/11/2017 Please don't stop this story! Don't stop any Young Justice story...you have no idea how this story gives me life and to just end there...no please update! |
ThatCurlyHairedGirl chapter 15 . 1/13/2017 Will this still be updated at all? |
TimeturnerJasmy chapter 15 . 12/26/2016 Damn. I read all of this right now, and I love it so freaking much. The way you write Dick is art. Simply beautiful, and utterly heart-wrenching. Please tell me this is still being updated. |
Momorulz chapter 15 . 11/5/2016 Plz update |
J-Wing chapter 15 . 10/30/2016 Oh gosh! Please continue this! It's amazing! |
kiwigirl32 chapter 2 . 10/10/2016 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY, U HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LOVE IT FOR HOW TRUE IT IS TO THESE CHARACTERS. I LOVE U I LOVE UR WRITING SO PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY OR AT LEAST GIVE IT TO SOMEONE WHO CAN FINISH IT FOR U. IT'S SUCH A GREAT FIC. |
batastrophe chapter 15 . 4/19/2016 I just blew through this thing in like a day! I know you wrote it a few years ago, but it's so, so, good. You're such a talented writer. I love so many things about this-Batgirl's origin, for one. You captured that defiance she has perfectly, but I love how the dynamic is changed because she and Dick already know each other. I also just love your Jason. You've really balanced the parts of him that are jaded and let down by the world with the parts that are incredibly hopeful and wanting to make a positive difference. It's great because I feel like a lot of writers-even comic book writers!-like to paint him as the "bad, dark, violent" Robin. I think he has a little of that in him, but really, I think you can't be Robin without some hope, without wanting to make the world better, without a sense of justice. Even Damian in the comics has to learn that, and he starts out far darker and more violent than Jason ever was. Anyways, I just really loved this story. Your sense of drama is spot-on, and the situations you put the characters in always really tested them, especially Deathstroke and this last one, with the wiped memories. I know it's been a very long time so I doubt you'll be updating, but if you ever did, I would sure be here to read it :) |
KILL MY ACCOUNT I WANT TO QUIT chapter 7 . 3/18/2016 Great story, but in Chapter 7, the last one of the kidnapping, you said that Wally ran 30 blocks in 30 minutes? While pretty fast, Wally's speed in Young Justice means he's able to run about 350 miles in 30 minutes, so I'm a little confused. |
Jsomethingorother chapter 15 . 6/23/2015 You know, every once in a while, I will find a batman story I really get in to. Last sevral times when I get to the end of what's been posted I will got to the authors profile to see that "O I have read these stories already, how did I miss this one?" Or I think "them again!" What I am trying to say is I love your work, and I hope you get around to updating some of you older stories. |
UrbanEagle chapter 15 . 5/12/2015 According to the timestamp, you've last updated in 2013. Please tell me you just hit a writer's block. Pleass say that because if you gave up on this fic I will be very bad. The execution is awesome. The pacing and the characters and the plot is awesome. I only have half of your writinf skills and I'm REALLY absorbed into what is going on in this story and how you will continue and end this. Please please please don't let this sit here. |
MussoTheMino chapter 15 . 9/18/2014 Great story. |
MarvelouslyLost chapter 15 . 9/11/2014 Please tell me it's not over!? You're such a good writer! |
T. Alana M chapter 6 . 7/26/2014 That is despicable. Deathstroke is a total monster of a character |
straw8erries chapter 15 . 5/10/2014 [SCREECHES] CASS CAIN. THAT IS ALL. GOODBYE. aaaaaa i really really love how you write all of the batfam—i'm sobbing ok. |