This whole retelling of Halo 4 is amazing! For someone who has always been a John/Kelly supporter since I read the Nylund novels, this is perfection! How Halo 4 should have been!

you just made me cry!

this absolutely beautiful

u do know that master chief of the navy is higher than cammander right?

It would be awesome if you did a story about the in between of Halo 4 and 5 like Kelly and the chief get married or something.

Oww! *-*

More of Fred and Linda next time, plz. those guys rocked and didnt get such a big part. otherwise this story is awesome. cant wait for blue 5!

i loved this. Not too romantic, but romantic all the same, and that's what made it the best! Too bad Kelly was so mean to Cortana. i hope she realizes just how much Cortana did in the end. I'll certainly be waiting for Blue 5. Great job! :D

Twas a great story. I loved it. It's just that there were parts where I felt you were a little too... Antagonistic towards Cortana. Especially this last chapter, I was like... Whoa, that's hurtful. Do you hate her or something?

Hmmm... I would've expected a John/Linda pairing. He showed some feeling towards her more. Nonetheless I enjoyed this greatly. A few errors here and there and rushed at some points but very fluid. Very well made! Outstanding job!

Static

Great story loved the personalities and the conflicts. Don't understand why it has so few favorites...

Wonderful! Just love it! Thank you so much for writing this. As I'm reading the halo books in the back of my mind I think of John and Kelly behind the scenes and this definitely follows those thought.

I really liked it

Very well writen. Follows the story line perfectly :D

Chapter 11 (10): Kelly gets angry when Del Rio accuses John of hallucinating.
Epilogue: Kelly accuses John of hallucinating.
Ladies and gentlemen, Kelly-087, the most consistent woman in the universe.