Please continue this I need more

Good story so far. I look forward to the next chapter.

Ralof, you dog!

I enjoy this story and love the premise. It's really entertaining. Ralof kissing Hinata was kinda creepy, lol. But that's just a nitpick. If there's any negative in this, it's that the stuttering isn't written that well. Hinata doesn't have a constant stutter, she's really soft spoken. It's difficult to get that across in writing though, so I'm assuming that's why you have her stuttering all the time.

You could maybe try adding in some things like people not being able to hear her? Adding some "Umms" to her dialogue? I'm really not sure. But that's all the negative I could find. This story is wonderful!

I want moooooooaaaaaar! Seriously, this story is awesome. Keep up the great work...
... Archangel Writings

I love your writing. You're able to carve your own plot without deviating from the original plot. love it ️

I like to see hinata bring Ralof to her ninja world with skyrim people to see her world like

Just finished binging this wonderful story. I love how your portraying Hinata and how the characters of Skyrim are interacting with her, and I especially love how your breathing life to those characters. Please continue this marvelous piece of fiction.

...somehow the idea of shy, quiet, little busty Hinata-chan being able to scream the world into submission...

...it fits.

I must say! I liked this a lot better than I thought I was going to! xD interesting idea, I certainly enjoy it. Maybe a bit underpowered for a ninja in my opinion, but hey- if she's too op from the get go, how will she grow?

I'm curious about what it would be like once she gets back home. What if hinata learned a shout that could open a portal between the worlds so she and possibly others could travel between the two worlds. I think it would be interesting to see Feandal and a few people from skyrim in the elemental nations or even just in konoha. Since we see hinata react to and learn about the world of skyrim it might be nice to also see the others react to and learn about ninjas and their world. Also I think I have an idea to how hinata could meet Cicero without joining the brotherhood she could help him when he gets stuck on a road there's an actual quest in the game. Or not, it's your story so do what you wanna do I'll still like it even if you don't use these ideas.
Sorry for how long this is, keep up the good work!

I am absolutely loving this story! You’ve been doing a very good job of describing the characters, if perhaps too much at times, but you may want to consider describing the environment more; not just physical scenery, but the tone of the place and how it makes Hinata feel. You did a good job of it with her visit to Jorvaskr, so I know you can do it! Keep up the great work!

A very well done chapter. Lots of detail and background. And you even gave a couple NPCs and OC’s a backstory of their own to fit into the story. Well done, and I await your next chapter.

Great fic! Not enough crossover fics are Hinata centric and I can't get enough of how you write her! I love the characerization of everyone and how realistic you write out Skyrim. Can't wait to see how the story progresses!

Excellent! You've done a marvelous interpretation of the characters so far. The only recommendation I would do at this point is maybe show how the Nords are not all good and the Imperials are not all bad; granted, I do side with Stormcloaks more often than not, but it'd be interesting to see what Hinata thinks of that.

Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapter!