Reviews for Champions of the Founders
kittyranma chapter 1 . 9/11
In Harry's first year I would bet that at least half the students checked out the third floor. Curiosity is human nature and more so in teens etc.
tstovall001 chapter 4 . 8/24
Good job, Severus.
tstovall001 chapter 3 . 8/24
At least everyone might eventually forgive Severus. He's doing a great job at making up for his misdeeds towards the students and staff. Who knows? Maybe Harry will forgive him someday, when he's ready.
NonCanonShips chapter 15 . 7/15
Wow. I can’t express how much I enjoyed this story.
Love a strong and happy Nev.
Always love Sev (glad he didn’t die when voldie was pushed through the vail, I assume Harry did something to his mark?)
Your Harry was ridiculously powerful and it was so much fun.
And Luna, she’s always awesome.
I dislike dumbles, canon and non, so this was a great fic for me

Thank you for sharing your wonderful ideas and talent.
NonCanonShips chapter 5 . 7/11
I’m a little confused as to why Sev has been given leniency and allowed to help and train the champions and their friends?
In previous chapters it was noted that he was paid to promote one and degrading and harass another, all others who were paid to do the same thing were stripped of privileges, yet he’s been given more.
I don’t understand how he can go from being demoted to caretaker and no teacher status in one chapter, to basically being their chaperone and mentor?

Thoroughly interesting story though and can’t wait see where it leads.
Vanadir chapter 15 . 6/22
Thank you for a great story it was a truly magical read
Lexus Lloyd chapter 6 . 5/19
you should have a portrait of lily and James
CelestialWings65 chapter 15 . 4/1
I really love this story and an glad that your dad printed it for his book collection. However, I am sad this story has come to an end but as you said all good things come to an end. I'll probably re-read this in the future and love it even more! Thank you for making this story feel so real just as much as the original Harry Potter series. This is probably one of my favorite Harry Potter Fanfiction so thank you so much for writing this.
Natsuki D chapter 15 . 2/1
Loved this story _
May be I'm just emotional today but I teard up at the end of this final chapter cause its sweet how they tot to live the rest of their lives but also sad that they died. But that is human life.
Loved the story thank you for writing it!
Esmereilda chapter 11 . 1/18
so much for moody's 'CONSTANT VIGILANCE!' XD
Esmereilda chapter 9 . 1/18
that's really saying something when he's worse than the 2 most evil wizards so far in this fic
J flood chapter 3 . 1/5
just a little up for your information too many disclaimers but I'm loving your story
Olaf74 chapter 2 . 1/2
*has a huge evil grin on his face after chapter 1*
unspoken-desires2u chapter 2 . 11/18/2019
hmm in the previous chapter you clearly say ward breakers were hired for privet drive and the Dursleys in prison. ...just a chapter later and you forgot? letting kreacher go break the wards and cause havoc? I see I'm not the only reader to review and tell you this yet you still have not bothered to correct it. to me a writer that forgets what they have wrote and then dismess reviews letting them know their errors speaks of somebody with no pride in their work or even care. a real shame as the storyline is quite good.
Lyarra12 chapter 7 . 10/6/2019
One thing in this chapter: at the top you accidentally said that "Things went as smooth as silk," said Harry pulling out Luna and Hannah's rings and handing them to each girl. Do you mean Luna and Susan? Also love the story!
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