Aww! This was adorable, I always love the idea of Axel and Saix as swmi-traitorous bodyguards for some reason. ;
And yes now you can know that at least one person will be reading your KH fan fiction XD

You updated! Omg, I'm so happy! I love your stories! This was a good chapter! I'd love to see it followed up on. Thank you, and you are awesome!

I just wanted to say that I love your Kingdom Hearts fics, and I'm always excited to read a new one! And I enjoyed this most recent one :)

I'M READING YOUR FICS!
I JUST REALIZED I NEVER GOT AROUND TO ANSWERING YOUR ANSWER TO MY LAST REVIEW (SORRY).
XION CALLS HIM SAI-SAI! AXEL AND SAÏX ARE SUCH GOOD FRIENDS! AAAAAAAAA (THAT ME SCREAMING AT THE PLATONIC AKUSAI THAT I LOVE AND CRAVE)
THIS REVIEW IS SHORT & NOT FILLED W/ MUCH BC IT'S 2:46 AM & I'M YELLING & TIRED.
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!

YAAAAA! RABERA GIRL IS WRITING AKUSAIROUSHI fanfiction again!

Awww! This was cute. I'm happy this finally got updated. Your Kingdom Hearts fics rock and they are always a joy to read!

DUDE SUDDEN IDEA WHILE REREADING THIS: The reason Lea cant keep a significant other for more then 5 minutes isn't actually him having bad taste, he'a just super duper aro and hasn't figured it out yet/doesn't know what that is. So he has no idea what hes doing in relationships and isn't really happy, things fall apart, fire bby is more sad because he feels like relationship is something he's supposed to do and why isnt it working for him.
I'm a genius. Definately not just bored and tired.

I like it but why cant they use magic they dont need keybaldes to use it ya know

I liked the first version more. Even though I can relate to Roxas despite the fact that I'm almost twenty two. Seeing people making out ... Eerk. Guess a part of me is still a child. I always have to remind myself that Saix can't see Xion's face lately. And I understand better his reaction this way. True to say, it's actually creepy to imagine a faceless Xion making out with someone.

Regarding your blank I don't know if you're still at it but in case you are I might have think of something. The interaction between Naminé and Xion being only the scene in Manor before Axel's arrival, why not picture a discussion between them by the end of KH II ? Let me explain. We could see in DDD (the more time passes by, the more I hate this game) that the people rejoining Sora were still conscious somehow. So, given the really strong connection between Kairi and Sora, and assuming that Naminé is still conscious too, couldn't they interact when Kairi and Sora are together ? Well that's just an idea.

The last line is very funny. I wonder too where the ideas for the crack pairings come from. Especially with Disney characters. I can't help but feel like it's cheating on the canon pairing from the movie. Anyways, beside the numbers, are the facts actually true ? Like the increase of AkuSai fics ? My my, fandom is such a wonderful and frightening thing. x)

This made me cry tears of happiness and sadness. It also made me need to re-read your other works leading up to this.

(its caxceberxvi btw)
lol very funny, loved saix reactions
i dont know how you'd wana go with nami and xi. if its sad maybe namine trying to talk xion through what shes going to do to get her back to sora , trying to make it seem simple and painless and take her worry away.
if its a happy thing then maybe namine is waiting around the mansion , looking for something to do and she comes across some of namines old sketch books and crayons with a few empty pages and decideds to do some art. ( maybe a few jokes about her being as terrible at it as sora is like the re:chain of memories novel?)

Phew, hate to be lea, right now. Also, this fanfiction idea of Lea, Isa, Roxas and Xion as a family is brilliant!

"Not even if it was a certain dusky princess from an exotic desert world?" OMG, Axel

I don't have complete ideas, but I think it would be cool having Xion help Namine prepare for a date with Riku or some other special occasion. Actually, I think any story about a Girl's Day Out would be nice. Maybe all the girls decided to throw a party and the two of them have been assigned to buy all the items.

Other than that, I think they would have a few interesting conversations after or during the whole Xehanort War ends, since they didn't really get the chance to talk much in Days and I'm not sure if they could do that while they were stuck in Sora and Kairi's hearts. It would be funny if there was some Life Lesson neither have been exposed to and are trying to figure out, but I wouldn't be able to give any ideas on what that could be.

Sorry for the giant block of text. Good luck with all those notebooks. I can't even imagine all that.

Hi Raberba! :D

I do love the meta. Makes you wonder what the characters really think of this rampant creepiness going around in the KH fandom. And the second story was just cute. :)

Good to see you're still writing Kingdom Hearts!