| Reviews for I bet |
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  Guest chapter 2 . 4/26 No one: NoT a SoUl: Lucy: hey dragon boy, Hove your way with me |
| Shiranai Atsune chapter 1 . 9/9/2019 I love it! ...did Natsu ever find out about the bet with Gray? |
 Ushindeshi chapter 2 . 8/21/2019 Cute chapter. |
| Ushindeshi chapter 1 . 8/21/2019 Nice lemon. |
| catspats31 chapter 1 . 2/5/2019 While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling only, please note this part of the Content Guidelines: "Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference." Remove all detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed like WattPad. |
| Sparti28 chapter 3 . 12/24/2018 That was hot loved it! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2018 LOL |
| xxfirebubblexx chapter 1 . 6/15/2018 Plot and lemon are good. I would love to see you proofread this and maybe edit it a little now that it's been a few years. For example L Natsu would grab Lucy by her waist, not waists. You have one, lol. And maybe a little more realistic reaction to foreplay. Work your way up to moaning and screaming. Start with more subtle reactions to build anticipation for your reader. Overall though I think it was really great. The inner conflict of desire and anxiety is very relatable. |
| Rushii Dragneel chapter 2 . 2/19/2018 Natsu sama Take me too against the wall... |
| Amandineylan chapter 1 . 2/4/2018 Why are so many comments negative? This fic deserves better! |
| Spurfunklefroy chapter 1 . 7/27/2017 All I have to say is I was eating a pickle while reading this... |
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/11/2017 . !Lemon again!Natsu you dumb donkey are you trying to have a million children!You can't take care of that many children! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2017 TOO..MUCH...LLEEEMMMOONNN!(_ _ _ has died from reading lemon that was too strong for her mind)my last words are,I wish I could've read all the NaLu fan fiction out there. |
| IJustWannaReadEpicStories chapter 1 . 4/19/2017 The lemon was badly written and extremely unrealistic. Too much screaming and thinking from Lucy. It was a turn off. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/10/2017 I always seem to read lemons when Im depressed...-_-'. It's kinda sad. |
