I ️ ur story. Is Simon a boxer? Can you please update? I can't wait.

When is there CLACE i need CLACE,

How is she going to become a parent at sixteen how can one face school with a child? I mean dude, be rational. Please.

So. He got blue or brown eyes? Make up ur mind lol 3

Lol Yassss bitch yassssssssssss!

pls update

Please update!

Aghhhhhh the Clace is reallll! Love it

Please update! Can Jace finally turn into a good guy? Daemon, was your inspiration from vampire diaries?

Whose POV was that? Please update soon, thanks.

Hey. So I have a lot to say...
I read a couple chapters of this story last year, but forgot all about it. So it was sort of like déjà vu when I started reading it again.
Secondly, I wanted to say kudos for the long chapters and many of them. I know how hard it is to write them like that so I wanted to show my appreciation for your talent and patience.
Next, I wanted to to talk to you about your plot. It seems as if you know what you wanna do and are follwing through with that, which is awesome, but a lot of the time it seems as if you are moving way too fast. I understand the way you are going but you have to allow the plot to play out, and gradually overtime add new thoughts and feelings into it. Maybe re-read your chapter and think about it in real life and if you would go from doing one thing to another so quickly.
One other thing would be that it seems that you have good grammar and comprehension skills, but they can be improved. In many of the chapters I found many minor imperfections and just think that with the help of a beta they would go away. A good beta would erase those mistakes and help to make the story flow more better, so try and find one?
Speaking of comorehension, I find a couple of things in your plot confusing and a bit rational. Simon's, for an instance, is really confusing and makes no sense. How does Simon getting beat up work its way into the storyline? And Jace, he went from being an enemy to a make-out session in the janitors closet and a secret lover. It doesn't seem clear on what his mind is doing, neither Clary's.
All in all though, it is an awesome story and is amazingly received by readers, I don't disagree. The characters seem tough and full of emotions, they just need to be tweaked into not changing thoughts too fast.
I hope that this is constructive and not too harsh, I honestly tried to be as honest and kind as I could.
Can't wait for more of the story, keep up the good writing :)

I REALLY ENJOYED THIS CHAPTER IT SHOWS HOW MUCH JACE NEEDS CLARY ! LOVE YOUR STORY !

Ooh my god! I've read so many stories in this genre but nothing as awesome as this! We need more Jace pov's. Keep writing I can't survive without this fan fic. It makes my day

I loved this chapter! Update soon!

you have to update again please. This is really good