I LOVE IT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH!

I love this story except for the ending :(. I wish you didnt discontiue it. It was a great start to a great fan fiction story. But i am happy you told us all why you are discontiueing it. I how you pubish more or something

With all hope, kiernan

If you come back to check your reviews, I think it's a wonderful thing that you're writing your own novel!

You have a real feel for dialog and for little quirks that create characterization, and the further you strayed from being Matched-y, the better it got. So your source material seems to have been holding you back.

You're also good about moving a scene along fast-and-lively (short paragraphs!) and showing us how people behave, rather than relying on a lot of telling-us-what-to-think.

Your plot outline of "here's a challenge, hey not so bad, but LOOK, the second round is MUCH WORSE" also shows good thinking on setting up the reader for real alarm. Cassia-and-rebel-medics arriving out of the blue, not so much... but when you're working with your own, totally original material, you'll have more freedom to foreshadow the Big Ending properly, so that readers *are* surprised while realizing that we should have seen it coming.

Best wishes on the "real" novel. I think you will do terrific!

D,X

Thanks for the overview and wrap. Appreciated!

HOW COULD YOU!

Wee Stumbled by your story a while ago. I usually find OC-centered fanfics irritating, but you, my dear, intrigued me. I like how Clara and Ayden are not your typical perfect people. They have their individual quirks which I find great. :))

This is adorable! I love the characterization.

This is really really good. Although I think having more that 2 kids is rare, and twins is even more rare, in the Society setting. I really like this story and I can't wait to read the next chapters! I haven't read many new stories lately and I'm so glad I found this one! Also, glad that the main character is short because I can relate, being only 5 foot and 1/4 inch!

OMG,so sorry for not reviewing the last few chapter, but it's still a-am-zing! I love it! I love how she kept messing up, I would too. XD You should keep writing!

Yay! Another amazing chapter!

Awesome chapter and Update again soon!

Nice to have ya back!

Just found this story today. Wish there were more Matched stories. Hoping for a HEA for your couple.

Good chapter!
What she means by being featured is that your story was featured on a thing called Fanfiction Friday over at the-society dot net. I was a little confused too :)