Someone has a thing for 1989 songs.

You should make a sequel! Please?! I really enjoyed this story!

Great story so far! But pleeeaase update!

Are they Jack, Jerry, Milton, Eddie and Rudy? Idk. Hehe
But please continue! Update soon!
I must have more. Cliffhangers are my
enemy! Haha!

Ahh just started reading this story again fell in love all over again please update soon

This is cool, but I'm confused does Brody Like Kat and if he does, does she know? Are Brody and Kat "Just Friends" (friend zone) or are they something more? I know a lot of questions. Hope you can answer them all!

YEEESSSSS, YOU'RE BACK! I think I'm gonna faint of excitement XD
Another swasome chapter, and you're right swasome IS the best adjective in the world XD
Oooooh, I like cliffhangers :), but only if they don't took too long :P
Is there any chance that the shadows to belong to Jack and other friends (that I totally forgot their names and now I have to read the story again to remember who they were) ?
Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Hope you'll update soon :D

I just read this story, and let me tell you something, it's SWASOME XD
I can't wait to see what will happen next :D
And for the OC CONTEST :

Name: Anne-Marie Short
Age: like Kim and the others
Personality: she's the tomboy girl tipe, not a slut; she's pretty, noticed by almost every boy, but she didn't date one yet; she doesn't get angry very often, but when she gets angry you have to be careful being around her; she can make you laugh, even when you're upset; she could be a nerd because she gets only good grades, but no one call her that cause of her looks; she could easily win a fight with a boy; she would bit her lip when she gets nervous; you wouldn't get tiret to hang out with her; she can be sarcastic when she's annoyed or pissed and she wouldn't date you if you're not Brody XD
Appearance: she has dark brown eyes (when she's very upset), normally brown eyes and light brown eyes (when she's excited or very happy); brown hair which goes lighter by the end; she's tall, but not taller than Kim; she has different outfits for her every mood like a white t-shirt with a leather jacket on top of it, black ripped jeans, black and white vans, black biker gloves with a white stripe, four silver round earrings in one ear and her hair in a ponytail when she isn't in a good mood, jeans, t-shirts and hoodies when she has a normal mood or dresses and other things with 'peace' when she's in a good mood and her hair is always naturally curled
School: Seaford
Karate: yes; she took karate before she moved here, she's a black belt like Kim and she didn't sign up in a dojo by now
Help Defeat Principal Horn/Black Dragons: yes
Skills: black belt karate, can skateboard, write different stories or lirics for her own songs
Likes: karate, skateboarding, writing song, hang out with friends, read/watch romance, action and SF books/movies, wrote her name like this Anne-Mar!e ;)
Dislikes: too unhealthy food, getting into fights, calling her by her surname 'Short'
Backstory: she used to live in Newport, California but she moved here because of her dad work; she moved here a month ago; she has a brother named Harry, which is thirteen; she always wanted to learn how to play drums

Hopefully this will help you somewhat )
If you'll use this you could change a few things that didn't catch your eye :P
HOPE you'll update soon :)

Name:Scarlett Karisma Ashes
Age:15
Personality:Courageous,Cocky,Fearless
Appearance:
Scarlett has light blue eyes,black straight long hair,bangs sweeped to the side, the ends of her hair is dyed red, as tall as Kim.

She wears dark clothes because she doesn't like bright colors. She usually wears a black tank top,skinny jeans and gloves with no fingers that are black and green with horizontal stripes. Always has a pair of black headphones hanging around their heck and black shoes.

School:Seaford

Karate:Yes, 7th degree black belt taught by another sensei in Bobby Wasabi Martial Arts in Miami

Helps Defeat Principal Horn/Black Dragons: Yes

Skills:Computer hacking,Boe staff,Skateboarding,Drawing

Likes:Music,Dancing,Karate,Soccer,Keyboard/Piano,

Dislikes: Yellow,Pink,Lies,Backstabbing, and can't stand Blood

Backstory:Scarlett grew up in Miami,Florida by herself because she was kicked out at the age of 13 by her father. She has been living off of stealing and selling stolen items, she has never been caught for these actions. Scarlett has been hitchhiking to get as far away from Miami as possible. That's when she ends up in Seaford and gets into a fight with Frank. She wipes out Frank after he threatens her when she bumps into him at the mall. Scarlett meets Brody by accidentally tripping and falling on him. The rest is up to you if you like it or not.

Sincerely,RossLynchLover13 3

great chapter

Part Two BTW:

Ariana's daughter Hayley up for adoption whilst moving her to Seaford for a fresh new start. There Ariana had wanted to gain popularity by the click of her finger so she had signed up for miss pearl of seaford after ready to sing one of her original songs. But after Kim Crawford had performed there was no time for Ariana to sing her song 'Right There' because of Kim's win. But that wasnt the reason she hated Kim. No. She wasnt that cruel. She hated Kim because of what had happened after Kim sang.

After Kim sang she ran off stage to talk to Ariana's immediate crush Jack Brewer but she turned him down. But that still wasnt the reason to why Ariana hated Kim. The reason she hated Kim was because of what happened after. Ariana went and asked out Jack but her turned her down hardcore. And it wsd the fault to the one and only Kimberly Anne Crawford. She turned around to go home and what she saw made her blood boil:
Kim. Kissing. Brody. Kim Crawford had two of Seafords hottest boys wrapped around her finger. And she didnt even try

Sorry for reposting...again. My computer keeps crashing. Anyway I didnt know if you wanted her good or not so I made her bad.

Name: Ariana O'dorherty
Age: 16
Personality: Rude, Selfish, Bitchy
Appearance: Long curly brown hair up to her hips bow pink lips with a hesrt shaped face. Long tan legs that are noticed by everyboy and is very curvy.

She used to go to a private bording school but then switched to swathmore. She doesnt do Karate but claimed to, to make her seem better than Kim. She doesnt help defeat the principle because Brody breaks up with her realising how bad of a person she is.
Skills: Lying and manipulating
Weakness: Seeing the good in people.
Likes: To manipulate, to make herself seem better compared to others, to be popular and to have wannabees.
Dislikes: Not being the center of attention and non girlish things
Friends: Her wannabees
Enemies: Kim Crawford Jenna Crawford Macy Crawford and Melody Brewer
Secrets: Using Brody to get back at Kim. Likes Jack Brewer (Both become public at the end)
Backstory:
Ariana was brought up by her single mother. She was used to being spoiled and getting everything she wanted. She was also used to getting double the paychecks during her birthday. You see Ariana's parents had been divorced since she was 5 years old and since then she hadnt seen her fathers face just the vague features of him she remembered. She was sent to a private school in Florida but had moved away after being 15 and pregnant. Her mother set up

Name: Ariana
Age: 15
Personality: Rude, Selfish, Bitchy
Appearance: Long curly brown hair down to her hips. Bow shaped lips with a heart shaped face, blue eyes. Long tan legs that catches the eye of every boy. And is very curvy
She goes to a provate bording school. Knows nothing about Karate but claims she does. She doesnt the principle

yes its the real crazychique im just too lazy to sign in. lol

Name: Ariana
Age: 15
Personality: Bit bitchy, rude, Selfish
Appearance: Long brown hair up to her hip bone.

Name:Ariana Adams
Age:15
Appearance: long brown hair and hazel eyes
Skinny and athletic
Personality:nice,funny,care-free
School:swathmore (outcast)
Karate: two belts lower than Kim
Helps defeat black dragons
Skills:computer hacking
Likes:Brody
Dislikes:Claire
Background:has one mother and has been bullied all her life