Wait nioooooooo... Why is that the end it can't be the end I will die... Ah

Love this lighthearted story that lures out smile after smile!

this story is hilarious. "My pretty princess" I can't stop laughing. Help.

I love your story, hope your still planning on that sequel :)

Interesting

believe it or not, i read this whole thing in one night, and finished it with very tired eyes, but i will read the sequel for sure...

Oh no! You cut his beautiful hair! I do lament every inch that is amiss! But nonetheless I really do love your story and plot. Thank you very much for sharing your wonderful piece of work and imagination with us readers!

Oh no! You cut his hair ! I do lament every inch that is amiss! But ninethr

Aro in here is adorable. Love your writing style. Now i am going to keep reading 'cause i can't get enough

This story is the funniest I have ever read

Oh my god! "Im a lady in distress!" Ha, my brothers name is Michael, so it was pretty funny picturing him saying thst, but also not too far-fetched.

I loved this!

Lol, what did Heather do to piss off Diana? I loved this. "I believe your cat just broke wind," I had to stop reading, I was laughing so hard.

Oh my god! I can't remember laughing so hard for a story!

I had a mini panic attack when I read this was the last chapter. q.q
This was the best fanfiction I've every read, you are very good, I don't even know how to discribe it. I usually end up rolling my eyes and scoffing a lot at twilight fan fictions but this story sucked me right in and I willingly did a Summersault into the rabbit hole.
I haven't checked to see if you wrote a second, and I'm praying that there is on on your profile. I might cry a lot and mope around the house if not... Then go play sims and think about how if wasted me life.
Depressing... Anywooo thanks for the amazing story.