carry on the story plz

Wow! Great opening! I would definitely like to hear Sasuke's POV. I would also love to see Hina with someone else who would make him feel just as miserable as he made her feel if not worse. so please hook him up with a Wonderful partner!

MAKE THE FULL STORY PLEEAAAASE!

Love it! Sasuke deserves that if you truly love Hinata you wouldn't cheat on her with the ugly ass slut Sakura. Hinata is like that best and you cheated with a lower women. Wow the greatest Uchiha isn't the greatest after all.

Please continue and make it a full story please!
Thank you!

Kinda a good ending, but i think there should've been more to this story. It was really good and I wanted a solution to his cheating. But than again this is not my story, really good. I don't pity Sasuke guess he deserve the distance from HInata. Good story.

Aww... What a nice song-fic :)

Love it can I see sasuke pov maybe Sakura too I want to know if she sorry

I want to see sasuke and Sakura point pov on this

OMG! It took an entire month for Hinata to get over her presumably long term boyfriend, who she loved enough to forgive for cheating and lived with! That is, like, soooo long. We all know a character like Hinata, a girl with major self-esteem issues and a girl who held onto her first love for at least 3 years, would never mope around for four weeks because a man she loved, and trusted, gave a second chance to, betrayed her.
But Sasuke was much more in character. After all, a young man with extreme focus, even tunnel-vision, on his goals would totally betray the woman he loves and habitually sleep with another woman. And, you know, his pride would completely allow him to make a fool of himself pleading with and harassing an ex.
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Maybe next time, kiddo.

This was so sad! I was bawling by the end. It's be nice to turn this into a story. Or you can write it in Sasuke's POV. But, that's just a suggestion. (:

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