Hello! I enjoyed reading this, and I was wondering if you’re writing another chapter, or just stopping here?

It was beautiful. Somehow insistently painful. I look forward to the continuation

A serial rapist...oh fuck. I'm so scared for them. Great chapter, like always!

I'm pretty sure orgasm denial isn't torture Kakashi but ok...

Will you update soon?

I love the story!

Super excited to read more of this. My heart! My boys! 3 I love Kakagai so much

Hello! First I apologize for wandering and also for errors in my writing (I speak Spanish Xd)
Well, I have to say that you have made me feel many things with this story. I love Kakagai / Gaikaka with all my heart, but most of all, I love Gai deeply, it is the love of my life XD. When you start your story it became new and precious, because they are always stories of "Gai in love with Kakashi" but you raised it the other way around, being Kakashi who was in love with Gai. That filled me with emotion from the beginning, because it is true that Kakashi had a million reasons to be in love with Gai, and to appreciate and value him. I felt identified with him. Everything Kakashi said about Gai was true, and although I couldn't think that I could fall in love more with Gai, you come with all those details and sweet words and compliments to Gai and I just felt in Kakashi's skin and every moment I felt it Unique and special, intimate. I appreciated each thing and took it as true, because Gai deserves all that love and flattery and attention, he is a character with a very valuable spirit, he deserves to be loved the way Kakashi loves him in this story. I was moved to tears by all the little things I appreciated about Gai. I have seen many comments everywhere where they say that Gai is ugly or that he does not deserve Kakashi, so I am very happy to see this version where you can see the masculine beauty of Gai where he deserves. Gai is handsome. And beautiful. And it deserves every word you wrote it with. Thanks for that. Really thank you.
About their relationship, I felt impatient first because they were going to deepen their relationship at once, but as you tell and clarify that things are clearly not like in a Yaoi manga, I calmed down and I saw it much clearer and much better. I ended up loving the concept of going slow and describing each thing, Kakashi's thoughts when he fantasized or when everything was frozen. Beautiful, sublime. The erotic parts were very tender, very romantic and despite that exciting and fun. The narrative is tangible, I could feel Gai's silky hair, and I could look at her bright eyelashes in the sunlight. I felt that I could touch his face with my hands. Wonderful. Caught, you wrapped my heart. Everything about them was perfect, every word, and every thing was credible to the extreme. I imagined Gai as the dominant of the relationship, the "seme", but I could also open up with this and I think Gai is beautiful as it is. There were many parts where I felt very sad and very much in agreement with everything sad, the parts of Rin, seeking his forgiveness, feeling sorry for so many things. The parts where he feels desperate and cowardly, about his father, about his retirement, where he decides to make love in an illusion because he thinks they will die. Those little parts are etched in my heart. I cried as I deserved the story that I did.
About Tenzou and Bensaku: they are wonderful. They are beautiful, I love them both, their story is so beautiful too. I love the irreverent and impatient youth of Tenzou, I love that he is so young and reckless, and so nervous, and I hate that way in which they do not appreciate how much he strives or what he suffered. Bensaku had a proper introduction and I took love quickly, it reminded me at first of the same disaster that was me. I know I may not have to say it, who knows? But I seriously identified with him. I was abused by someone in my family when I was a child. And that feeling of guilt and sexual discomfort spread all my life, that you can become an attacker and that everything will go to hell and you're not worthy of anything. I understand you Besaku. I cried at all times when trying to go through that and not feel someone disgusting and doing something wrong. Honestly, when he talks to Kuma about it, it hurt more, but I felt very relieved when he told him that it was not the same, that no one was ever prepared to be raped. Is right. I was very touched and cried much more. It is a subject that you handled very well.
The story is beautiful, I would like so many more things to happen and I want to know much more. I hope you can continue when you feel well. I will be waiting to know what happened. It is undoubtedly one of the best stories I have read, both for its content and for the way it is narrated and exposed, a masterpiece without a doubt. I love. Thank you for giving us something as beautiful as this. Thank you thank you thank you.

This fic is amazing! Thanks for updating

the day i find this story you gave it an update! that is such a relief because i am head over heels for this story. i binged it in two days because i couldnt get enough. it's not everyday where i find a fiction that writes gai so realistically. can't wait for more

This last chapter gives that tight chest feeling every time I read it and I want to cry but also I can’t stop smiling, I am so lonely I live vicariously through fictional characters’ happiness. Please update soon.

Wow, I don't even know where to begin my praise for this story because every chapter never disappoints! I really like how both of the couples are progressing in their relationship. You make it so real and captivating. The characters really come alive with how you describe their changes in body language, inner thoughts and well thought out dialogue. Usually I find myself glazing over dialogue in other fanfics but here I always find myself chuckling (or cackling especially in those tenzo sassy moments with bensaku). There is an abundance of wittiness and deep meaningful conversations that keeps me enthralled. I am very curious to find out how Tenzo and Bensaku will take things all the way. Ch45 made me really happy to see them both take a huge step in the right direction. Also, Kakashi and Gai have yet to explore more ways to "further their relationship" (I am also totally stealing that euphemism for future use ;)) so I am excited to see what variety they will add to their love life. Keep up the good work and I will definetly review more often now that you are updating so regularly (your update notifications in my inbox brighten up my day :D)

You know even though I don't like slash I don't have a problem with it existing... But this pairing makes me want to puke

I need more! Don’t leave me hanging like this :0!

Holy shit an update!