You need a space between his and first in the first paragraph.

I really think you might have written borderline bestiality here and I think you need a warning for that. That is something not all people like to read. I had assumed this was a "during the full moon Scott realizes Stiles is his mate and they get together the next day" not a "they had wild, bestial sex" thing. (I hope I didn't offend you there, if I did, it wasn't intentional, Sorry)

Sorry about the previous review. I was reviewing a Wil/Sheldon from Bing Bang Theory fic before yours. I was logged out but I logged back in and I had both of the fics opened so I clicked the wrong tab. My bad! I'm really sorry about that.

Now for the real review. I LOVE Scott/Stiles. And you have no idea how hard it is for me to find good fics about them. I'm just glad I stumbled upon yours. Yours is an excellent Scott/Stiles fic. I really enjoyed reading it immensely. Thank you so much for writing this steamy fic about these two bonbons.

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This was hot! I loved the way you wrote this. Sheldon and Wil were so sexy together. Way to go!

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oooh no loved it! so sexy and mmmm who wouldnt want scotts meat?

that . . . was not what I expected . . . and I LOVED it!

Good smut with the last part was longer though can't wait to read more.

this was just awsome, from there their love will emerge. they will realize that they are inlove with each other. you should continue this story, Scott will be in control while he spends the nights with stoilles, stilles will be his mate and anchor