I really loved Merida in this story! She was sassy and outspoken and somewhat sarcastic, which I really liked. I am incredibly impressed by your ability to write their accents! Great story!

They didn’t kiss :\

Macintosh is the perfect fit. Come on. He's the bad boy you love to hate and yet so much more. He has a heart of gold deep down. MacGuffin is too boring. Wee Dingwall is just-you know-well. You know.

Macintosh would be the most interesting one. #MERITOSH forever.

Very cute

Please continue wrìting my dear, you have a real talent in writing, I only wish there were more writings about Meritosh. Good luck and God bless. I will be expecting more from you.

That was beautiful thing I ever read, it made me happy that I cried happy tears :D X

CONTINUE PUHLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE :((( oh and could u try adding a lil lemon? :) it'll give it the spark it needs

Loved it! _ I ship these two as well! XD

Nawwwww beyond cute and awesome I can't stop smiling please continue _

I really liked this :) there are not enough things shipping these two!

The accents were written a bit more like Hagrid than Merida, but I think that overall it was a very good attempt. God forbid I try and write unfamiliar accents, I believe I would offend more than a few people! The story was really sweet, and even though I'm more a MacGuffin/Merida shipper I found this one really nice. The boys in Brave were a bit one dimensional so it's great to see a wee but of character coming out to play here in MacIntosh. Good job! :)

that was sweet, now I'm defiantly think they are perfect together

Only one chapter?! Auhhhh... I have to say, your accenting of the two characters was done amazingly well! Just be careful not to let that bleed into your unquoted words. I only found one mistake and that was probably just a simple slip of the finger. When talking about the luncheon with the three young lords, you said "toutchy" instead of "touchy". That's it though, this fan-fic was had both perfect spelling and proper grammar (which is so refreshing. I literally felt like I was drinking a cold glass of water in the desert, not kidding). I can't wait to see this take off- hint hint, PLEASE post your next chapter. Thanks! Nice job...

I ship this paring so hard ever since I saw this movie. Which was...today. I only with this story was longer!

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