Oh no! What happened to Sora? And what will Kairi react on it (more generally), what will ALL of his friends react. I'm just getting more curious and can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, I also want to clarify: Namiri and Namine are different, right?

Who is Namiri? Did you mean Namine by any chance?

This story is fantastic! Hard to find a better KHIII- based story! Keep up the good work and please update soon!

So Terra will be in the next chapter. Cool. Now I get it Namiri is supposed to be a spy for Xehanort. That's not good. Btw will Vanitias be in here as well?

Now I hate Xehanort even more now. Making Sora cheat on Kairi. Good thing he stopped himself. What worlds are you planing to be in this story?

Great chapter love the Sora/Kairi moment.

oh my my my.. Sound as interested to me.. Please update! :D

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Wait min... Don't tell me Master Xehanort used a puppet(Namiri) to get Sora for x blade? Need more! Update please!

Yea that no ifs, ands, or buts. This was at a good part too.

This story looks interesting. Update soon!

I love this fic so far. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

-Khaos

Oh, your back! Thats good.

You might wants to cut out the first person stuff from the beginning here... It doesn't flow well with the overall rhythm of the story you've already created in the earlier chapters. Stick with the third person telling of the story from the narrator's perspective, it's much easier and more enjoyable to read, and it's good to remain consistent when writing a story. Other than that, nice peek so far... Kinda short, but it is only a preview after all. Just wanna say good job here, because when you delete this preview and replace it with the real chapter, I won't be able to drop another review due to only being able to put out one per chapter.

Interesting... Let's see how this turns out. So you plan on having Xehanort make an evil version of Kairi. That should prove quite interesting for everyone involved, since it's bound to produce some cool scenes. Good job so far, I don't have much to criticize yet, but there does seem to be a lot to look forward to. Keep up the good work, and hope to see an update soon.

It's clear you are familiar with KH3D, which is what this story is branching from. If you're familiar with The World Ends with You, there's a lot of awesome characters you can use from that game that I wouldn't mind seeing here. If not, oh well... I'm also an old time Disney buff, so any reference to those forms of media would also be welcome, especially since minor villains and secondary movies don't receive much mention in the Kingdom Hearts series. (With the exception of Sparky from Stitch the Movie)

Can't wait to see more! Until next time, have fun and keep going! :)