This story was AMAZING! I loved every bit of it.
Coulson has always been one of my favorite characters and you wrote him absolutely perfectly.
I also loved the way you have a Faith aspect in this story.
Very well written and I cannot WAIT for the next installments!

This there going to be more of this? Or a sequel or something? Because I love this so much.

I really love this. It's touching and gives so many feels. I like how you characterized Coulson, him and Rachel have a family vibe going on in the end. I hope this continues.

I laughed when I read her saying that "everyone has daddy issues" because it's so true! In the comics, Captain America's father was an alcoholic who beat Captain America and his mother until he died. I love this fanfic! Good work!

Your writing is good, your OC comes across a bit bland and holier-than-thou though

Just re-read the whole thing still love it. ~,~

I sincerely enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing your writing. I will be extremely excited if/when you post more about your Rachel. ~,~

Loved your story! I liked Rachel and can't wait to read a sequel with her in it if you decide to. I could see Rachel and Phil as really good friends or a cute couple in the future. Also I wonder how the others would react to finding out Rachel was from a different dimension? So many possibilities. Lol. I cant believe it took so long to find this story but I'm glad I found it cause your a great writer! Keep up the awesome work your doing and please continue this story! - V.V. ps. I hope your church trip went well and you had lots of fun!

This story is incredible! You are a fantastic writer.

I really liked this story - I read in one go.
Rachel's great, can't wait to see her as Coulson's assistant.

Well, it's taken me a while to finish reading this, last time I reviewed I was on chapter 14, but I am very glad that I did. I am very happy with the way you portrayed Agent Coulson as a protector and "Mama Bear." I hope you have a nice and meaningful trip and I can't wait for you to update in about, a year:))

Awesome!

This story is fantastic! Rachel is a great, realistic character. And the portrayal of everyone else was spot on.

I love it! I love the idea of her being a SHIElD agent. It fits the story so much better than what we'd talked about. You are an amazing writer. I can't wait for more!

You should see the goofy grin I get when I read a awesome story, this was an amazing last chapter, I look forward to seeing Rachel again in other stories. I love how you left the ending open like that, giving it an ending that suggests more stories, even if you hadn't said you would be continuing it. Your a wonderful writer and I look forward to reading more of your beautiful stories!