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RainFlame chapter 1 . 8/13 ;_; The brotherly fluff/angst is all I’m asking for, and boy you delivered. Thank you for crushing my heart :’) |
seireidoragon chapter 1 . 2/10 This is a pretty good story and I really liked the last line. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2017 I love hugging my parents because of how they feel and smell, and now I unconsciously take a deep breath in through my nose absorbing their scents. Almost like I'm trying to memorize them, imprinting them into my memory for the rest of my life. My sister too. She smells good too. |
Lokithenightfury chapter 1 . 5/28/2016 That last line got me... . |
Shelby the Hedgehog chapter 1 . 4/20/2016 Oh man... poor Ed... I just kept wanting to hug him or... something. |
yuumiimuu chapter 1 . 12/28/2014 I REALLY enjoyed that! So much torture! MWAHAHAHA! I'm a torture-lover! And that was so sweet - Ed smelling Al. Erm, saying it like that sounds a tad weird but you get it, right? XD Anywhoo, this was great and I love love loved it! I know this was written a few years ago and you might not see this review but meh - I still felt the need to say how awesome this was. XD |
ShadowPillow chapter 1 . 10/31/2014 And I think also sense of touch for Al, to be able to feel everything again suddenly. It's not something we notice so much since we can, but it's like being numbed when going to the dentist. Just thinking about being numb like that everywhere... That's how Al was. And after he gets his body back, he can feel all that again |
TheColdfireAlchemist chapter 1 . 5/19/2014 Very vivid, but I want to know more! What happened to my Edo-kun?! |
Johanni93 chapter 1 . 11/10/2013 I definitely enjoyed reading this great fic! I'm just a bit sad that there isn't more of this awesomeness... Thanks for sharing! |
xxnarufanxx chapter 1 . 10/9/2013 very nicely done! |
Shiroi Ichigo-chan chapter 1 . 4/8/2013 Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw! Loved it :D! |
Victorious-Mind chapter 1 . 3/21/2013 Aww, that was just soo cute! I loved it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2013 Very sweet! :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2012 Very sweet! Loved this! :) |
Queen Bovine chapter 1 . 12/10/2012 "He hoped it wasn't something as short as twenty minutes. Because that would really suck." That line was hilarious. It's just so...Ed-ish to think about life and death (or at least his own) in such understated terms. Anyway, I loved this fic, and I'd really to see a companion piece. |