Completely beautiful and interesting! Loved it! (Whaaaaaaaaaaaaat was Thor doing there?!)

Terrific story. Normally I grow impatient with one shots that long, but for this story it felt just right. Not one word feels unnecessary and I like how you draw small conclusions and revelations that lead to one final conclusion. It was very well paced and the words you worked with just impressive. The relationship you described seems very complex and how you handled it was great. That was really a story I enjoyed reading every single word of.

I really, really like this. It's a very beautiful portraying about Charles and Erik relationship, gentle but strong, some bittersweet. I really enjoyed every minute of reading this, thank you. And I wonder if you'd ever plan on writing some...prequel about their past relationship?
Great work :D

Sigh. I really love this. It's so bittersweet but still a fix-it, and I don't know how that works, but it does. I definitely teared up a little somewhere around when Charles is finally in Erik's mind, and again at "I've got you."

I assume you're responsible for the helicase pun, Pangea. A for working that in there. :)

Also, the choices of quotes were perfect. Thank you both for writing this.

This was very beautifully written and I enjoyed every minute of it. I'd love to know if you plan to do a prequel pertaining to their past together, maybe with a little angst.

Love Wolfy

P.S. I'm going out for a cigarette after that love-making scene *whistles* ;D