Hello, there:)
I love this story a lot, it's very original.
I hope you are able to start updating again. I really want to know what happens:)

finally a good fanfic!
i cant wait for the next chapter :)

Not bad.

I do suggest that you edit the bit about Arizona reminding Bella of her mother, as there are no beaches there - because Arizona is land-locked. I believe you have referenced the beach a couple times actually.

Also - while it is only a small detail, it is extremely unlikely that a meth addict, living in a trailer park, supporting a teenage daughter would be donating to a women's shelter. Addicts do not donate to charitable organizations, they pawn shit. If she was addicted to meth, her proverbial lens would be narrowed to only her immediate reality.

Character development is very important to me, however - including short-lived characters.

On a more positive note, I am only 4 chapters in, but I like the general tone of Bella and Jacob's friendship. Their exchanges feel authentic.

jake's kind of being a dick but i love the story. can't wait for more:)

I definetly have respect for this story, what with you completely changing up the characters and their storylines- which you did very well may I add- and I can most certainly see myself reading it as you add on to it! Excited for your next update!
-GabzHaug

can't wait for more:)

ON DAMN! 0.0

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE:) LOVE THE STORY!

CRAZY JASPER... :D

UPDATE! :D

update this soon please

loved it plese update soo :D

This is so great, please update soon!

interesting...

I'm in love with your story! I'm definitely going to be checking in from time-to-time. I can't wait for the next chapter! How will Forks take in Bella? This is the first rocker one I've met. Kudos.