This is seriously one of my favorite fan fictions ever. You do an amazing job of telling a story with silhouettes - giving just enough for the reader to fill in without having to scramble - and making it feel incredibly natural. I'd love to read more from this idea, but it is a great piece on its own.

FAN!

I like this. It gets tiring to read stories of Loki escaping and never changing his looks at all. Yet, no one notices him. I believe that if he does escape, he changes his looks and possibly his gender. It makes more sense for the Trickster to do so and to be comfortable as either gender. I just don't think he's stupid and this works for me.

Thank you.