The lack of Masumi and Shuu sibling fics have bothered me for so long, but I stumbled across yours, and this brought me to tears. Your writing is amazing!

I love your story. Finally a Masumi Shuuichi fic *_*
I don't think they're much OOC, I can imagine them interacting like that. The only thing that bothered me is the age gap (I'm not sure if it was already known at the time of writing, but in the case with the red woman Masumi's middle brother classmates were 28-29, so Shuuichi should be at least 9 months older, making him about 13 years older than Masumi).

I loved your fanfiction *-* I am not a fan of them, and lately I am not that interested in love affairs, so reading something about those two was so nice! I imagined their meeting exactly how you described it

That was cute! Looking forward to more!

I love it! Great story :)

Its a refreshing story from sera akais pov.

thank you for writing this fanfic, i was always awaiting this kind of fanfic. its really awesome!

That was so cute! :))) This is the very kind of story I've been looking for Sera, I'm glad I've read yours. Their brother-sister interaction is the same relationship I've imagined for them. You've made a great job!

Very cute! I was wondering what sort of Sera-Shuu sibling fics were out there and this was exactly the sort of thing I was hoping to find. Well done and thank you!

So cool. We definitely need more Sera-Shuuichi fics.

Damn it! Wonderful story but, you just totally ruined my story. Though, maybe it was better like this than through a fiery critic later on.

Trust me, your fiction is actually very believable. The emotions, expressions and reactions of both characters are logical and real. I like it so much, thank you. I barely write any review but this ones hot is so good that I just can't help but write one this long.

P/s: can you write a Akai/Akemi Oneshot. I'd love to see something comes from a great writer like you.

awesome! keep it up.

Really great. It fits my own theory about 'The bad kid'-comment.

Squee! This was painful and heartwarming. I love how you highlighted and expanded on Sera's "bad kid" reflection. You're right, Sera-Shuu sib fic is in short supply, so thanks for posting this from the bottom of my fangirl heart.