Interesting plot. I like your writing!

Wow! I love the way you write! I find it extremely pretty! The book is great! I would love to see if there are any more chapters! I really hope there is!

Please update

i love this story, will it be continued? because you should continue it

thanks for this fanfic man I was so hungry but then I ate a nutella and banana sandwhich like rin did and was 100% fuller... good job

R-R-Rin-Rin? I think you need a hug. Here is a hug for you! *Arms open wide* I hope to see more chapters Author-San.

Ooooo I can't wait for the next chapter!

I hope this will be continued... 3

Will this be continued?

These chapters are way too short. I was totally getting into it and the next thing I know, I'm griping for the next button. You've created an interesting fic, and I can't wait to see more. Update soon and good luck writing!

Oh SHIT. He didn't, did he? Or did the chaos mix up things? Rin didn't even look, after all...

Poor Rin...-sobs- I really, really hate it when he gets in so much pain...

-hands over platter- Magic cupcakes for you!

Oh wow! Did Rin...really kill them? Interesting. I'm kinda rooting for Satan to find him soon...

Rin, that poor baby! I shouldn't love him right now, but I just can't help myself!

8C he killed them? O say it ain't so Q_Q But than again they did bring it upon themselves but the blue flames shouldn't kill Yukio right? o-o ah whatever :P I can't imagine what the hell Rin is feeling after that or not even knowing what happened. I wanna freaking know what happens next cause Rin has absolutely no where to go and the wonder is just killing me on where he's going to end up. Awesome, amazing, eye boggling, whatever other synonyms there are, chapter :) Looking forward for the next one!

Yukio and Ryuji are... dead!? How much is Rin suffering right now...