Great job on the story, I like it please update it thanks. :)

Great chapter! Keep up the great work!

Getting mega fantastic good can't wait for more

Great Chapter! Don't die Axel! Please update soon!

No don't die Axel :( can't wait for more

Nooooooo ooooooh why do you love to torture us Dx. T.T axel you better be alive in the next chapter and I forget but was the crystal Aqua?

Aw Poor Roxas. I hope they make it out alright

Dang it Larxene DX just go die already. I have a question. Roxas looked at the picture, why didn't he say anything about his brother or was he just to focused on Axel?

My this is soooo! cliffhanger! oh! please please i hope you update soon!

Oh no! Roxas wake up! :O darn it! I hate Larxene -_- anyho can't wait for the next chapter.

getting really good can't wait for more :)

Please. PLEASE. Update. I NEED to know what happened. I stayed up to four o'clock in the morning the other night reading this, it's so good!

Laaaav iiit. I'm a sucker for Roxas merman stories

you despicable, cliffhanging fiend .
*quickly hides flames for fear of daytime television* well I meant to say what a wonderful view i see as i dangle over this... very.. tall cliff :D
he got his voice back now, yay! but what about the hair and eyes? or did i just miss that? and what is going on with Axel? owo
update soon, i think my fingers are slipping, and i don't like the look of this drop...
Lixal

I can't wait for more! Please update soon!