Reviews for Entangled States |
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Time Lady 802379 chapter 17 . 7/5 I loved this so much! Your characterisation was spot on, and the descriptions of their separate mannerisms have me goosebumps when I realised I could see them in my head! Off to look for this sequel now, I look forward to it! |
Jamie chapter 1 . 6/20/2019 This is amazing |
ThornsHaveRoses chapter 17 . 8/18/2018 Brilliant story! I loved every bit of it. I often find the movies don't have enough time to go cas on how much our heros are suffering, especially Bruce! So I'm so glad you did! The characters were really well done, and I loved Clint too as the guy helping Tony and Bruce! Can't wait for the sequel. |
SaiyaCat chapter 17 . 7/8/2018 AAAAwwwwww |
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 17 . 6/18/2018 Thank you. Good day, good night, and good luck. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2018 Do you hear my fangirl screech? I think you may have heard my fangirl screech. This is exactly what I wanted and people should come up with brilliant ideas like this more often. |
The Alien of Pluto chapter 17 . 8/30/2017 This is the ultimate hurt/comfort. Literally walking in each other's shoes, true and deep friendships, actually acknowledging and talking about feelings...and still being loyal to the characters' selves. Nice. I love this. Especially the friendship between Barton and Banner. I don't see that often. It's wonderful to see it here |
Ihatechoosinganame chapter 17 . 1/16/2017 really enjoyed your story./ It was well written |
Tekie Scythe chapter 17 . 9/6/2016 sequel? |
Thrae Elddim chapter 17 . 10/19/2015 This is probably the most intense and serious take I've ever seen on the body-swap plot, and it was exhilarating. Thank you do much for writing this. |
sierra.steinbrecher chapter 9 . 7/23/2015 I loved this. I was afraid the switch was looking too one-sided, and then you balanced the scales with the arc issue. |
microscope chapter 3 . 7/18/2015 Wow, I just started reading this, but I absolutely love it! This story has great potential, and I can tell that you have quite a talent for writing. Well done, can't wait to finish! :) |
Blackwolf-20 chapter 17 . 5/30/2015 One word. AMAZING! I read this whole story within three days and have been unable to concentrate on anything else. Yours is the first body switching Avengers fanfiction I have ever read, and I know it will be the best that I have read. Speaking on the note of writing a body switch fic in general, you captured it perfectly. I loved how you differentiated the behaviors and mannerisms between Tony and Bruce which we might not normally notice and how that helps keep it straight that they are in each others bodies. Also, the little marks of saying things like Bruce was using Tony's hands, keeps that straight and keeps up the seriousness of the situation. I think other writers of the body switching fics fail to capture those details. Also, I have to point out this is the one story that truly made me feel like crying for Bruce. I can read all types of drama and not feel that strongly about it cause it can be a common plot element. There are many stories of Bruce struggling with the Hulk, but you've written this story so beautifully my heart ached for him. I was really expecting Tony and Bruce to do some heroic missions in each others bodies and it would be the only thing missing out of the story for me. Other than that, this was brilliant work. You captured these two perfectly. |
Rose Hathaway Potter chapter 17 . 4/22/2015 very good! |
faithfreedom chapter 17 . 1/9/2015 Wow! This was amazing! perfect! |