Took you long enough!
I so love it, this is so awesome and exciting, I want more chapters of this... soon!
(just so I don'tt say now... :p)
The chapter was great, I really liked it and really can't wait for the next one, Naruto and Hinata's turn! :D
And Hinata has my favorite element water and she is my favorite female character, so I'm all like 'Yesssssssssss!' :p
But I do have to say, you have chosen every girl's element perfectly, Temari uses wind in the manga/anime, so it's logical, Sakura's temper is just like fire, burning everything down when angry and Hinata is always the calm one and silent one, like the water, but can be powerful and dangerous, if it/she wants to :) And Ino's image suites the earth element.
Ahhhhhhh, I can't wait for the main part of the story to begin, I'm so excited and this is still only the beginning .
Please update soon, really soon and sorry for the overlong review :P

Great chapter, interesting she have fire powers. I assume she would be earth (but that is already taken) well water mistress (since she is a healer)

That was so epic, amazing, excellent.
Those words can't really describe how great this fic is, be language, way of writing, originality of plot and story, everything!
Please do update soon.

This...this is really interesting. :) Yup. I can't wait to see who else is going to be a Mistress even though I have a fairly good idea s to who. Please update soon. XD Love the Story. -

I seriously like this story! Omg I'm so excited

Great chapter, wonder what happen to Sakura.

The girl was Hinata and she the water mistress right? Please change the pairing to Hinata and Kyuubi or Kurama as some call him. Please! He can even be Naruto's older brother. The earth mistress is either going to be Sakura or Tenten right? I like Tenten and I think she fits the bill for super strength and earth better than Sakura who I think is a better fire mistress with her temper. Also I not a big fan of HinataxNaruto, but I like Naruto and Sakura. Could Naruto want to take his brothers place as next ruler of Kohona after is godmother Tsuande pass on? Since this is post under Hinata does that mean she going to be the leader and most chapters be her pov. or will share pov among the girls equaly? Will the boys share their thoughts any? Will you pair Tenten up with someone other than Neji? It just that as soon as people think of Tenten they think of Neji and it will be nice for a little change in that. Please update soon as this seem like a good storyline.

Great chapter.

lol it was a funny good kinda chessey u could have givin him the lazy thing like the real shikamaru but who cares it was still good who is the earth mistress TELL ME! lol

I hope you write more! This is a very interesting start despite the shortness.

Great start so far.