Hope you had a lovely Xmas and a Happy New Year to you.

Walking in the shadow as Edmund and Susan do can be the hardest to do but a least you can see both sides but Peter (not sure about Lucy) is not walking properly in the light.

This is like watching a train wreak happening an you know there is nothing that can be done except brace yourself parrticularly when you are a s you say " too numb and too tired to actually care." Sad.

loved it :D

I liked it. And I always thought Edmund and Susan were more closer to each other.

that was so beautiful

I found it interesting and enjoyable. I think you described how Edmund and Susan feel perfectly. Ecspecially Susan! Update again soon please!

Oooo like this how you have used light and dark to portray the siblings.

The sorrow Edmund and Susan feel and how they are given hope when they return to Narnia.