so beautiful loved it

very nice :)

Oh gosh. That was absolutely beautiful.

nawww cute! and very well written

Omg this is awesome for a first writing and stay turbo-tastic!

Amazing. :) You should write more, you have a real talent for writing. :)

This was really sweet, and I liked the touch with the Velveteen rabbit quotes.

"Fix-it may be half my height, but he's ten times the man any of you ladies will ever be. Am I clear?"
AMEN. Damn out of all the Felix/Calhoun story this one has to be one of my top five favorite ones, I love your style of writing and the way you write these two together which is why I'm hoping there's mote from you real soon!:D

I love the Velvateen Rabbit quoutes! It was fave book when i was little, so i was happy to see some quotes in her! Anyway, great story, VERY heartfelt, i loved it! Keep It Up, Good Work!

That was beautiful. (: Love it.

SO adorable.

Aww this story gives me the honeyglows something awful ;) Hehe, but seriously you did a great job. It was so in character and well written! Keep up the good work!

Pandas

I really love how you've incorporated the velvatine rabbit into this, gives a good parallel theme. This entire story is great, written well, very sweet. Great work :)

Why did I never consider that fact about the cy-bugs eating what they become when it came to Brad? Ah, that just makes Calhoun's back story that more depressing.

Anyways, great story! First fanfic? For real? Very well done!

You killed me with the quotes from Velveteen Rabbit. So perfect. So in character and and sweet.