And... here it is again- a perfect little story!

This is really a good story. Even though, I never like Harry potter and of course i didn't know anything about them. But, still i can feel the how the story going on. It's so sweet. Thank you for a such beautiful love story. Good job

It's been so long since I read this! I can definitely tell how your style has changed and improved, but it's still really really beautiful and makes my heart sigh 3

Perfect!

um, if i am not in love with this then i don't know what it is

I just love the whole feeling and atmosphere you built with the rain and the twirls and it's like I'm there and I can feel it and I can feel their love it just feels real thank you for this your fics are different from others they feel less like stories and more like art

Oh yes!

This was really good, very well written! I really like your writing style. The background, how there was a tidbit of history between them from each year, was nice to have. It was cute, adorable, and very fluffy. I loved it!

That...was...ADORABLE.
omg Jily feels aslkdhgjlsadh literally that was so wonderful! :D

Very cute! I loved how you went through their entire relationship and made it real. Great job!

-Charmy

OKay that was too sweet! Fluffy and Jily and asdfghjkl;

Awwwww too cute! Wonderfully written; you're writing style is amazing! I'm not usually too big on Lily/James stories, but this was fantastic.

ohhhh that was so sweet. Good job.

Thus was really sweet... And slightly confusing... But still a really good story.
You should make a story of James and Lily in sixth year... I would really enjoy it and make this story even sweeter. Can you PM me if you decide to or not?

Awwwww! Loved it!