This is interesting yet angst filled! I am very interested to see what else happens! Great writing by the way! I can really feel the emotions and it's very smooth to read! :)

I really like this, but the ending is not satisfying in the least. I feel like there should be an epilogue, or something more. Others may see the ending as kind of sweet, and Alfred has a slight victory over bulimia. Yay, good for him, but we don't get to see how Arthur is doing. I would have suggested a bit more development of Arthur's side, but focusing of Alfred for the chapter was a good idea. The ending still gets me. There should be more, I think.
You're a good author and this story is a great idea! But a great ending for a great story would be..well, great. I don't want to make you feel bad, but reviews are for constructive criticism, which I think I might be doing it wrong...I don't want you to feel insulted; I just want to inform you of how I feel about the ending. However, I want to thank you very much for the great read. :D

Hn. Quite intriguing. It's cool how you develop a large part of the story in one chapter, almost as if i can feel everything happening. And I like how you aren't afraid to use certain outright words that other authors might deem to offensive or outright.
You're writing style is...interesting. It's not dull, but not exciting either. It's kind of slow and steady, like a we'll get there when we get there kind of feel. It's a style with its up and downs. Perfect for this chapter, I think.

I'm so happy to see your work. You're a very good writer. Your work even when one a grim topic, brings a smile to me. I hope you feel better soon, but please never think you haven't made a difference to others. Your presence in Hetalia is a gift. :)

Love it

Well hello there,
Whatever inspired you to continue this story, it was lovely. Is it over now or are you going to fix them completely?

this was very good. I cld never imagine what it must be like to go through an eating disorder. Is this from personal experience? Not tryin to be rude, just asking. You don't havta answer if you don't want. Anyway great story, I rlly enjoyed it. :-)

This is so sad...D: It's full of so much emotion and stuff that it makes me want to cry. ;-;

Bravo.

Cheers,
Gone

This is so tragic and beautiful written. Well done.
And I hope you are doing alright, love. :)

Good story! And by the way, I hope you are ok from your bulimia. I had it a couple years back too. My thoughts are with you! *hugs*

I don't have much to say but I like to drop reviews on things I liked, since it's nice to get them. So yeah, I liked this very much.

This was beautifully sad. And dear, I really hope you recover again. When I that it was coming back it made me sadder than that story. If you beat it once, you can beat it again. Stay strong, lovely.

aw man i loved this.
i know that feel bro
once suffered from annorexia...nit cool bro .
hope youre doing well

Aw the ending was cute and sad. I want Arthur and Alfred to meet again now, thanks!QQ

I wish so much that there was a continuation or epilogue of this :)