oh no, oh no, oh no! did Brendan just...and did Steven just...? their timing has the worst luck! and is Steven the broken one? broken bones; or is Brendan the broken one? - his heart is breaking! all those questions Brendan is asking - how sad, no one to help answer them; and now Brendan has even parted from his beloved cross; and 'he steps away, back into the shadows...this is so not what was supposed to happen!

This is much better than what we got in the episode. Poor Brendan. I love him kissing Ste, and Ste waking up at the end. So sad.

Love this little ficlet so so much! Can't wait for another long story...

*wibbles* "Brendan..." GAH! Love it! :D

All im going to say is :(

Oh my. The ending *cries*. This is how I imagine the scene went, when Brendan gave Ste his cross. Darn HO for not showing it, but thank you for writing it! Lovely stuff xx

That really was beautiful and so emotional. Poor brendan :-( you captured his thoughts perfectly. I really hope we get to see something like this in the show. Another brilliant fic xx

aww.

That was beautiful. I wish we had something like this in fridays episode when Brendan visited Ste in hospital. You really have done a great job with this one shot. Well done.