Pleasee I started reading your story yesterday & finished all 11 chapters in 2 days ..loved every bit of it..specially how observant Scarlet is..and how different from Bella specially..the story has its own different plot from the original twilight & that’s why I’m so hooked to it..please update soon cause I absolutely love it & would like to know what happened to Scar after she fell down..
Best wishes to you :)

I really hope you come back to this one day. I'd love to find out what happens next.

Story is good. I like where it's going. Needs a proofreader because there are so many errors, almost every sentence or two. Also, the bit of Spanish you used was horribly incorrect. I don't even know how you got that, since Google translate wouldn't have given you such a bad translation.

That's such a great story. O really wish there was more to read.

I don’t think she should want to apologize. Too many times have I read a Bella having no backbone. Especially when it’s a SI character. Why can’t you just tell him off and be done with it. Would you really tolerate that type of treatment in real life? I hope you don’t because I sure as heck don’t.

You left me hanging! I am very much looking forward to your next update!

An OC that is not a Mary Sue? Yes! I really enjoyed all 11 chapters (read it in one sitting). I'm in awe over how well written it is. I'm pleased that Charlie actually gets to be a dad (the book left a lot lacking in his relationship with Bella). I'm also enjoying the slow-burn of Scarlett and Edward's relationship. I am sad that there's no more to read. I hope you update soon.

I look forward to reading some more of this when you update again! It’s pretty good and it’d be interesting to see where it goes.

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OMG olease update soon! Loving this

Oohh :D I forgot to add on the previous comment how much I'm loving the pace between Edward and Scarlett I always found Bella and Edwards relationship so unrealistic is cringy but his with Scarlett I'm loving because the pacing is slow and they are being friends first and taking their time. Also her relationship with Alice how rocky it is also I'm loving how they have to work for their friendship and is going up and down.

Also my heart melted at how your allowing Charlie to be a dad and I love your interpretation of him I hope you keep adding him and Scar father daughter more and keep adding moments where it'll allow him to be a dad to fill in for lost time. His reaction was really realistic in this situation and I loved the scene.

I am so happy you updated the story and added another chapter. I really love Scarlett and this story is amazing. I gladly and happily re-read the story from the first chapter to refresh my memories. I cannot wait to see here this goes.

Here I am. Ready to restart this journey before reading the newest chapter. I'm very excited!

I'M SO HAPPY THIS UPDATED. I'MMA REREAD AND JUST REACQUAINT MYSELF WITH THIS MASTERPIECE

This character annoys me so bad. Instead of being grateful she got another chance at life she acts like a depressed loser. She myst of been a spoiled brat as Scarlet.