I am a huge fan if yours you know that. This is missing our characters which would just make thus even more dynamic. I love the depth if your writing here. But as a fan looking for fanfic I would be remiss if I didn't encourage you to really blend your oc with the gang. It would help readers connect with this story. You are awesome as a writer. This show had a small cast so we're more invested in each character. I'm not wanting to hurt your feelings. I know what you are capable of. I know others will review and respond to your writing..it seems like an original fix rather than fanfic. Keep writing this. It's good and can be truly great