i remember reading this some time ago before it was edited, and im not going to lie, i forgot about it until i was reading your updated version, but from what i can remember, as well as reading a bit of the unedited chapter 7, your writing has improved greatly, there are a few isolated incidents of the sentences not making much sense, such as words being out of order, but that's normal. I also remember seeing that you used wonder instead wander, but other than that specific mistake, nothing jumped out at me. i hope you are in good health and safety, and i hope you can stay positive in your life,
all the best!

You know, I just realized that her sword appeared on her hip the moment that she needed it to block... or did I misread it?

Loving these updates! I can't wait for more 3

PLEASE UPDATE

Waste isn't spelled like that, just saying.
Also I want to know if Nasia will keep having so many romantic urges, I get that she likes Link, and it's very clear Link likes her, but I think that even though she has the urge and then tosses it aside, she still goes with it, will she ever really put the urge aside though, especially in a battle or something?

Dang Dream, you're good at this, I knew you had an imagination, but wow your good.

Your story is really good! You are a great writer! I hope you update soon, I look forward to it.

I love this story. I'm not even kidding. Its magnificently written and the storyline is terrific. Gods, I love it.

AHH PLEASE COME BACK. UPDATE THIS LOVELY WORK OF FICTION.

Noo... I can see I'm heading toward the last of the updated chapters... This is tragic. I don't know if I dare continue on.

Yet, I really want to. I also want to see them kiss already. Huff. :I

not sure when they'll end up kissing, but I hope it's soon. hehe.

Aww, all the little fluff! I love fluffy stuff! :D

Anyways, I'm really liking this story! :D

And that's really all I have to say...I know, I'm boring. :/

I LOVE this story! I hope you keep up the good work! .

Okay, I've been reading this for the past to days and I couldn't stop, I really like how well put together this is! I want more! Please don't stop now! Update :)

XD Dude, I remember this! My siblings and I would fool around and launch Link out of the cannon most of the time while playing!

Update soon! This is a great story!