poor ivan and alfred at least on the brighter side things are looking up for the couple!

Oh my god! I love this story so much! Plz plz plz update soon!

Please update this! This is a wonder AU! I'd LOVE, LOVE, LOVE to read the rest! 3

Ahck! My baby! Ahhh! This is quite adorable and heart aching.

AWww. This chapter is so sad. I can't wait to see what more you have. And this chapter was very good but I hope whatever is going on in your life is ok.
Alfred F. Jones

Update soon please

Who the frick is Tyler...

Thank goodness this isn't over! I was so upset! *pout* Not cool! I can't wait to see more of their relationship and how everythinig goes and more about little Alfie and why no one was there for his birthday! I mean come on! Anyway thank you for the update and I hope to get another one soon!
Alfred F. Jones

That's the end? But...But that's not fair! YOu have to keep writing, please! Please! Please.

I'm so excited for ye next chapter!This sounds Like it's gonna be ao uber cute!

Hey it's LadyAnnabethHermioneToriRide (Bridget)! Sorry I would login but I'm on my phone so I'm just too lazy! :P I like the story you wrote. I haven't read the thing it's based on so I don't understand it completely yet but it's still really sweet an really good! I can't wait to read more! :D

Oh hoho! This plot is quite intriguing. I am very eager to read more!

Aw it's sweet that alfred cares, can'tt wait for the chapter.

Great job. I noticed in one part you put Tyler instead of Ivan. Where did that come from?

This is a wonderful start! However, my only question would be...who is Tyler? (5th paragraph down; last sentence). Other than that please continue this!