| Reviews for Conversations on a Park Bench |
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HaTsUnE-mIkU chapter 13 . 6/26/2017 That... was BEAUTIFUL! I must complain about the grammar and spelling mistakes, but the actual story made up for all of them. You just wrote an amazing story with all my favorite ships. Thank you so much! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2017 The alternate ver of the rolling girl and miku didn't die U just made my day 0 |
Bandit chapter 11 . 10/3/2015 This was the best fucking fanfic ever |
JK Writes chapter 1 . 8/7/2015 I'm already fangirling. Is that bad? |
Lolllll no chapter 9 . 7/26/2015 Omg no you cut her hair I stopped reading when I read that it was really cut.. Disappointing. I liked that fanfic. |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/15/2015 You Sir/Ma'am (I dunno you're gender author-san so sorry) are making a amazing fanfiction. |
Yuki chapter 12 . 5/27/2015 Here is a review for you. I know it finish but I just want you, the author, to know that you have done an amazing job on this story and I hope that you keep writing many more. |
gingersnapbunny chapter 12 . 5/16/2015 *Sniff* The story ended. Good chapter! |
gingersnapbunny chapter 11 . 5/16/2015 SOOOO Cute! It's the one of the best chapters in the story! Anyways, very cute, good chapter. |
Editor chapter 1 . 10/20/2014 I love your writing technique. The only problem is that in almost every sentence there is an Adverb. Now Adverbs should be used INFREQUENTLY. They should not be used every sentence, if you play it right you should be able to tell that how she said it, or how it was done. Anyways, keep writing, you always get better :) |
WonderRin chapter 1 . 4/3/2014 I like it. It's interesting. Wonderful. Get it? My name is WonderRin...? Nevermind. :3 |
Blue Tapioca chapter 12 . 4/3/2014 I burly read your story and while its 5 in the morning I just couldn't stop reading it was sad at time and happy at others be sure that I will now favorite and follow you as a fellow author I congratulate you because I have never actually cried thanks you a story and well I did just that so thanks very much for writing this story I appreciate your work and well KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK0 |
Blue Tapioca chapter 8 . 4/3/2014 its very possible to kidnap your own child (seen it on the news like 3 or 4 times) |
mrzombieghost chapter 9 . 1/24/2014 A whole week!? NO, MIKU NOO! jesus. ;-; Go Kaito! |
XxKingArthurIIIxX chapter 12 . 1/18/2014 This was a really great story. I loved it. I loved reading about Miku and Kaito's relationship turn into love, the humour in the story despite its dark themes, and the side parings thrown into the mix. I'm also glad Miku and Meiko didn't end their relationship on bitter terms, it brought a smile on my face, and while I don't like Meiko paired with Kaito, I still do like Meiko, so thanks for that. I also liked the personality you gave Rin and Len. They were so evil but so cute, and when Miku first came to the classroom and said she liked ice cream, I thought her classmates' reaction was priceless. I died of laughter. I love the title of your story. "Conversations on a park bench" it's what first made me click this story, and I also liked how you connected your story to that title on several occasions. I thought that was really cool. *sigh* Sweet Ann and Big Al annoyed me. This the first fan fiction I've read with them in it, and the first time I've truly hated them. Ann was so...ugh, and so was her boyfriend (I'm sure you understand what I'm talking about) I was so glad to see them locked up, so Miku could be with her new family, though I never imagined Luka and Gakupo would ever adopt her. It took me completely by surprise. I loved the endings for chapter 11 and 12, but especially for chapter 12. It was just so...fitting. I'm glad her mother congratulated her and Miku forgave her mother in the end, and somehow I think it was kind of cool how she wasn't there in the flesh, but through that note. One word was enough to give me shivers. ...I don't know how to end this review, so I guess I'll see you off with a smile :D |