perfect...

heartbreaking! but so beautiful

I think you should rewrite this. The story feels incomplete and the reader is never shown why these two are so in love. Also, I can deal with an open ending; however, it seems premeditated to write that "She was free to love," when the threat of the ministry is still hanging over their hears. I like the idea of the story, but it could have been executed better.

AD

How can she go to him with the threat of the Minister still hanging over their heads?

Boo Hoo, who is he to make decisions for her? I know he's her father, but she's a grown woman.

How can Hermione ask the man she loved and knows loved her to go to her wedding? *smh

Ouch...poor Draco.

Good beginning. The emotions come through well.

I very much liked this one. :)

Omg omg omg I love it! One comment the minister is kind of like president snow from the hunger games. In catching fire. Who agrees?
- ANEwrites

Loved this so much, sad that it's finished. :(

Yay! We get more! It really is Christmas!

im not so sure about these chapters ast 15, the ending there was lovely, im just a little concerned that explaining to much would ruin the beauty of it and the focus you have created on how painful or wonderfully intense emotions can be

I think this story is really sad but I seem to like it very much! I'm still a bit confused on why Hermione married Ron in the first place...could you clarify that for me in a PM or something?
This story is great!

I love the story! But seriously, WHY did she marry Ron? I feel like I'm missing something big here.