Ooh, perhaps the companions could help.

Good chapter. liked the subtle hints and details

very well done narrative. I could hear the 2 characters voices

Great start! very creative premise

HOW SOON CAN YOU GET MORE UP!? I just read this today, and I'm hooked to what you have so far. lol This is very good.

You've got quite a few typos, including the apostrophe in the title, "thank you once more for agreeing to my request once more", and "the decision to betray us was a difficult for him". There may be others.

With that said, I'm interested in where you plan to take this.