Great fic so far quite engaging n.n

this 'story' if it can even be called that is just a mass of exposition and a list of the things harry has done. the grammar is super trash you constantly repeat wordswords likelike this for somesome stupid reasonreason.

Damn it we don't want a rewrite! We want this story to continue. We don't need anything else. Just please update this story. No need for any rewrites or elaborate stuff. Just update this story and keep it as it is! Please update man, I plead of you. We really love this story.

...really? You're a college student with a tiny penis, uh I mean laptop? That part was like... wow srsly?! Well and here I was thinking that you should have left fumbles alive so that he could have a challenge. But now... yeah. You know I was thinking that they were going to have an orgy then and there in the last part! Though what happened to weasley and Granger? Haven't seen hide or tail of them for a while... looking forward for when he goes to conquer China. That's gonna be pretty exciting. And the shinobi and samurai as well! Love all the different pantheons and legends and myths going around. It's what makes this a singularly unique fic. This is one of my most favourite stories! Gg author!

was that the valley of peace? as in... KUNGFU PANDA?!

Man you really need a beta...

Yeah... *wince* it is a bit bland.

Thank you so much for recognising the mud blood isn't intelligent

Brilliant, considering that the intelligent race of dragons could be reconstructed of dinosaurs.
The archeologjcal finds do not limit this idea

Hm... Hmmmmmm. Not sure if you are trolling or high... Might work as a crack-fic though, but what do I know?

P.s What are you smoking? Genuinely interestedI mean, it must be something strong for you to crank these out...

What are you snorting? It was nuts.

I really think that you went overboard with the teachers thing, doubling the core subjects I can understand, other than that I believe is too much

you know the biggest damm problem of your fic is that it follows this formula: "Harry went there did that power up" again and again and again, and THAT IS BORING! too little actual action and interaction between characters, is like it promises to turn intersting with every paragraph but it never delivers

do you realize that your fic so far is almost pure exposition with little to none narrative value?

He DID that in a week? Bullshit. I know this is fantasy fanfiction but PLEASE, tone it down.