MORE.

This is the first story I have read like this. I do like it.

I like it so far! Its really good.

Ooooooit WAS just a single chapter. Hmm still a treat to read! Buuuuut I do feel kind of embarrassed know after that other review. (Phew) akward. Um I'll just go know bye,I'm gone,like a ninja,or a ghost,maybe a cat,or a panther,forget I'm leaving like a chicktopuss. More chapters soooooonnnnnnnn. (Just shot strait into the air through the roof)

Wow I was just checking for an update on the story expecting only one chapter... I should check more often... Well this is a treat!

*sings* It's back-ba-a-a-ack! I'm so happy to read more from you again! Even if this was a short chapter, it was certainly funny and worth the wait. Orson is still as dummy/awesome as always, idk, I loved how he reacted to Princess Bubblegum's actions, hehe. Anyway, glad to see the princesses are working hard to aid their hero, that's so nice...! I wanna stick to this fic as the possible future for Finn and Flame Princess (never mind 'Frost & Fire') Your story is my new headcanon. :D

Nice job! See you soon!

I know it's rather discouraging at time, but one just has to push forward, I'm not a hater towards Fiolee, but sometimes I wish other kind of plots received the same amount of love. Anyway, there's still the few that still push forward, so it's alright D! Anyway, don't worry too much about canon, things like that are bound to happen, specially with the so-called 'troll-season' Season 5 turned out to be hehe... Anyway, to the chapter, and beyond!

Well... I'll tell you this, I can see what you mean by this chapter not being as good, and for a while, it probably would've been... and then canon comes along, hold your shoulders, and give you a big hug saying 'you're right, this is great', something that probably wouldn't have happened if you had posted this when it was probably intended, so, in a way, the hiatus did you some good D!

Okay, seriously, now given the unknowns, a scientific curiosity (even if not at a PB level, no one can beat her at that XP!), and a big sense of camaraderie towards Finn and FP. I'd say Orson's reaction were completely spot on, while still trying to hold a bit of common sense to it D. And PB... well, we know what lack of sleep can turn her into hehe... but her reaction was like... lol, it literally killed me D.

So... Orson knows, the truth is out, and he's even gonna help out, I still somewhat find the concept of a Royal Promise being too much of a risk in every case, but I'll let it pass only because it's been in AT since day one. Finn's awesome like that, everyone's gonna help, and that's awesome.

It may just be some sort of bridge chapter, but it was necessary, and you pulled it out rather well, great job on it Mooniac, keep at it!

Man, this was certainly worth the wait and I'm glad to know that PB wanted to help Finn and FP out after what the former had done to protect Ooo on a daily basis. I also agree some of the fanfictions out there and I do agree that there are a few good ones out there.

Anyway, great job on this chapter and I look forward to the next one. :)

Yes! A new chapter! Welcome back, man. How long has it been? 8 months?

The princesses are helping PB to make something that could help FP to control her flames? I'm kinda wondering what LSP would actually do if she was a part of this.

Nicely done. Needs a little spelling checks. Overall really great.

Don't worry, it's perfectly understandable! I'd be surprised if that hadn't happened to you already, sometimes RL forces us to go missing for a long time and it can't be helped. It's wonderful to see that you're back in action. I'm super excited to read more of this story again! _

Welcome back!

Thanks for the update and don't worry, I know the next chapter is worth the wait! :)

Amazing! I... I'm at a loss for words! That is all, you can return to your writing, Book Writing Prince/or/Princess.

(Stadiam full of fans for adventure time and YOU). POST ANOTHER CHAPTER! POST ANOTHER CHAPTER! POST ANOTHER CHAPTER! POST ANOTHER CHAPTER!

Been quite a few months, huh? I guess you're busy too. Hope to read again one day.

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