Wow! I love that you had a prophecy of your own within the arc of the Merlin saga and I always love foreshadowing. It's great to see it come full circle back and tie up a plot line to propel the story forward. The reference to Merlin sleeping forever makes me think of Stargate: SG1 in season 9 where Merlin story arc is added (as the writers show that Earth god's /myth/legendary people are actually advanced civilization s with higher technology/enlightenment). I am enjoying this adventure thus far! Tally-ho!

Ack this is scary

Uh. For your A/N in d beginning... I fear that d show hasn't made u happier or meet your expectations haha

The translation of 8 is hilarious

you can't forcefully out him dangit

the frickity frackity what?

please,please I know this book is complete and I love it already, please don't kill off Dayla, I really hope you don't

I thought the refrence was a Harry Potter one, dang

Erm... shouldn't he be arrested for lying for years...? Cause there are bloody druids that are being accepted into the castle... so he suddenly has a problem with Merlin's magic? Whaaat? Sorry can't read anymore- there's no logic in this.

I'm a bit skeptical that Gwen and Merlin would have such a conversation after a year she's queen. Like he should know that her maidservant is probably like George and should know not to bow to Gwen but only to tease her and he and Arthur should know what she likes to do in her free time. Come on it's been a year. You like can't convince me this is a conversation they would have in the morning- it's only for the reader's benefit. Hope I made sense in what I was trying to say

Loved this story! And I loved how it ended. You made there be a story after the story, rather then fitting the bad guy, winning and the end. There was more to tell and I loved it!

The sword shaking scene was also funny and this deal with Merlin and the sword is reminding me a lot of the cursed/talking book in Ella Enchanted.

"It's dark in here"
That line was hilarious and this story is fun.

I knew that the birds [or at least Morven's] were reporting info. I just didn't want too believe it because of how lovely the birds are.

Honestly, from the beginning of this story when it was first mentioned in the prophecy, I knew the Once and Future King thing [and Merlin's habit of calling Arthur this during serious battles and conversations] would play a part in exposing Merlin's secret. I also felt off about the mirror scene in the beginning.

It's nice to know that no one's enchanted, but with the way things are going [you know, an evil sorcerer/seer on the loose and evil druids wiping out good druid camps], I almost wish they were. I'm at least glad that Arthur had Merlin arrested in private without the knowledge of the wicked druids. So is the gem that Morven speaks of, the one that he carries that seems to affect Merlin negatively?