This is really good and I'm so very interested in what happens next... Please update soon

PLEEEAAASSSEEE WRITE MORE!

:)

I loved this chapter! I'm looking forward to the next one.

For some reason I totally knew it would be Zevran.

I love this story!

Yay new chapter! Oh I can't for more! This is going to be exciting to read!

te e echado de menos espero mas capitulos de mi historia preferida , sabes ley una pagina de esta historia y me gusto tanto que fui a tu perfil ley 2 primeras seguidas espero mas me gustaria mas pronto pero si hay que tardar mas para sea tan buena pos bueno adios

Oh I know~ Gaaaaaaaah! Aedan... At least everyone's alright so far. I can't wait to see what happens next, as always. I'm glad you're making progress, and happily await the next chapter, whenever it may be!

I'm glad you included Bann Sighard so early in the rebellion. He's my favorite vote in the Landsmeet. As for ideas when it comes to allies, I recommend having Wynne approach Irving for support (particularly runes and accessories). I remember Olyvia likes Shale but you'll need to figure out how to get the control rod. If you need to infiltrate Denerim or something, I'm sure Olyvia and Zevran can get Soris and Shianni to cooperate from the Alienage since Anora never fails to piss off the elves. I hope to see the Warden Commander play some role as well since you introduced her so nicely during Aidan's exorcism. Too bad Anders is already at Kirkwall but maybe Oghren can have something funny to add.

Good to see the story continue and the family return to Ferelden. Having allies against Aedan is far better than facing him alone.

No! Why?! You are so evil! Now I have to wait until the next chapter?! I'm pretty sure they won't die but the cliffhanger's still gonna bug me! And aaaaaalllllllllll the babies now huh? Daw Can't wait to see what's next!

aww, little Kennic Duncan :)

Awww, and such a good story too!

I noticed that Olyvia said "they" earlier, I'm guessing she felt it.
Oh my god, I want this to continue. Is it too selfish of me to tell you to update more whenever you're ready?
That and never abandon this story.

Maker watch over you :D

From fearing loss to birth, wow. Initially, when the midwife said that she wasn't done yet, I was thinking excitedly that there was a twin. Regardless though, definite happiness in the ending of this one. Looking forward to updates of Dianna's story too. :)