This is really interesting!

Wow, that was really well written, description was detailed, characters spot on. And the way you described Tifa's fight, Zack's wounds sephiroth's mindset etc, was great. I can't wait to see you update! A promising story.

I want moar new ones!

Oh yay! I liked the original but I do like the rewrite as well. If you are still looking for a beta, feel free to PM me. I do some betaing for another author on here. :)

I could beta read it for you. It would be easier to email it to me than using the beta reader on here. Pm me if you are interested in me being a beta reader. :)

good chapter

Oh My Gosh! This is SO much better then the original! I loved rereading it. I can't wait until I get to read the next chapter! XD

I can see the difference already! Brilliant, beautiful work, painting a wonderful scene of Midgar in my mind. I like the stronger focus on 521 at the beginning. All in all, great work! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Whoa! Nice! Better touch. I love it. Please write more when you can.

This is so well-written and attention-getting that I want to read it over and over again! There were some grammar and spelling errors, but not many. I love how you re-wrote this, it's so descriptive you can picture everything in your mind, and when you finish it's like waking up from a dream. Update soon!

Woo, looong chapter, read this on the train home. Not complaining though, I love long chapters.

I liked the chapter about Wedge;
"Wedge was just that kind of person. The kind that had managed to talk himself out of killing a spider in the shower drain once just because he couldn't reach it and smash it right away..."
my favourite roly-poly npc.

This is an interesting what-if scenario.

Ooh. It's about time another good Zack story showed up! :) I think I was reading your previous version too, and I liked it a lot! Definitely looking forward to seeing where this one goes. It's off to a great start, and I can't wait to see what kind of encounter might occur between Zack and his mysterious enemy. :)