Your endings are just fine. I don't know you keep insinuating that they are bad

Make a story! Out of this

Totally enjoyed the story. I haven't seen the show but might give it a try.

i loved this! great job!

It was a real good story. Have you thought about writing about when Bryan first proposed the idea of spanking to David and Bryan's first spanking from David.

wow it was a good one shot thanks keep up the great work

I Looooooved it :D

Awesome story! I'm so pleased that you decided to write another New Normal fic. :) I'm still loving the show. I think your fic does a good job of showing the love and affection the characters have for each other. I can picture Bryan having a tantrum over a hat. I can also see David being very unhappy with Bryan for breaking something in a fit. I thought the spanking was prefect for the infraction. I loved David lecturing as he spanked. Thanks so much for posting it, it made me happy.

So happy you wrote this. I love how you write their relationship. Loved this.