I thought this story was really nice. Good job. And could I ask for a request, if it's okay? Could you write a tai chi chasers reader insert if it's okay. I don't see many of them and I was wondering if you could come up with a story. I love tai chi chasers. Great story.

Wow aima, what a fantastic chapter.

It was slightly better. He's still not acting like the Finn of the show.

YAY FOR FINN! UPDATE SOON!
-ahsokazami2001.

Why the h*ll is Finn so bipolar? He's too OOC in this fanfic. Since when is Finn all emotional like that? wtf.

Can you make Finn less bipolar?

ew

Aww this is cute :D I'm loving it so far, even though I feel bad for poor Finn XP I will so continue reading this later

Just try to make friends who like you for who you are!If they don't like that,find people don't like you for you,you are to good for those losers!

I'm sorry for no profanity but, you beat the hell out of them. Don't waste your time on taekwondo or karate watch a Madea movie and use whoop yo' oss fu

This is awesome please write more!

Just ignore her. Heck, for all we know, she's jealous of all your other features. In my health class, we learned that bullying is often a mask for insecurity, or a lack of power.

Follow your heart and whatever u want to do, I was bullied in elementary school too and its not very fun im a second year in middle school and i could only imagine what your going through, but hang on those people aint got nothing on u! -D

Hi, I just read the note. Just ignore her. But about the sugestions...
1) Can you make Finn be adopted.
1.5) Can you make Finn also be part Dragonoid.
1.5.5) And he doesn't know?
2) Please make the continuity better. In Chapter One you said, "Finelia's legs which were cut, bruised, and bleeding" and "'I agree with you but please treat me like everyone else'", but in Chapter Two you said, "He had never gotten an injury in his life" and Finn wants to be treated like a prince.
3) Can you make someone call him a girl? He has long hair and wears a dress.
4) Can you add in a female OC (possibly a Dragonoid) that is totally used to pain and is really poor, but somehow bonds with Finn easily? And then she dissapeers?
4.5) Can you make that OC return in "Finn's Illness" and be an enemy that secretly loves Finn? And Finn secretly loves her back?
5) Can you make a subplot about Brianna?
Some of these suggestions are really crazy, but I hope they inspire you.

Here's one of my favourite quotes, "Never be bullied into silence. Never allow yourself to be made a victim. Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself." - Harvey Fierstein. No one has a right to judge you for what you look like, what race you are, or discriminate against you. If they do, screw them. If she tells you that you have a big bottum, tell her to shut her pudgy lips. What I'm saying is that all you have to do is ignore them and don't give a shizz about whatever the heck they say. It's your life, and let those who respect you come to your side. You're not alone. Many people are on your side. Accept yourself, then let society accept you.